Halo345

Halo345

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Novel / Donghua Version

BTTH Life Simulator System

Anime & Comics · Kisshot

Halo345

1yr

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Interesting ending even through it was logical considering he was stronger than everyone else. Bit it ist not very satisfying in regards To Hancock, Yamamoto and Bellamy. Don't misunderstand. I don't a romatic development but something which can provide closure. Otherweise thank you for the story. It was a very enjoyable story for me.

ch 30 Chapter 030 – Answers - Epilogue

The Lone Wolf - A One Piece Fan-Fiction

Anime & Comics · GodOfFreedom

Halo345

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I was not sure how to rate this fanfic. I hate NTR so I should like it but at the same time is seriously depressing. I mean you read about destroyed youth and bitterness in adultlife. It is like seeing a person die again and again and again. But then I watched a video on youtube. He would sit one time in the week imagining his wife/child dead because he wasn´t good enough. And then he would snap out of the imagination but the feelings remain. He than uses all this feelings of anger, sadness, wothlessness, self-hatred... to be a great husband, a great father, a great provider.... What I want to say is take these short stories as a lesson. You this kind of shit of betraying your partner or being disrespectful life somehow find a way to fuck you back. Because if you do it is very likely that what the author is writing is going to happen. Video about the guy who motivates himself by imagining his family dead:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l0Bilr7jcCY&list=LL&index=8

Short stories of NTR Consequences

Anime & Comics · ClicK_iT

Halo345

2yr

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Could it be that mixed up the order of chapters? This chapter reads as if he has got past the Dementors while in the last chapter he still worked on the Patronus.

ch 25 Expecto Patronum

Magus of the Wizarding World

Book&Literature · Arrowinmyknee

Halo345

2yr

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Otome Dori is one of the few where I hate nearly every character. It is also one where I want to punch the MC in the nuts.

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my world H created by God- fanfic

Anime & Comics · Nick_Rick12

Halo345

3yr

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Thanks for the chapter You don't really write how Leylin uses the 'sentient force' he gathers. The most logical for a Magus would be to use it on his ''Magic''. But I rather like the thought that his physical Stats (Vitality, Agility, Strength) also grow with. Especially since he can easily do this with his sentient force.

ch 50 Chapter 49

WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION

Anime & Comics · Keetarp

Halo345

3yr

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Why do you only want to strengthen the body, soul, and mind? Why not strengthen magic as well? He will after all go to different worlds. Therefore he should be as powerful as possible.

ch 0 8 Harry Potter 7

Gamer: Dimensional Mercenary

Anime & Comics · GrreedyGoblin

Halo345

3yr

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Welcome back and great chapter. It opens a facet of the magic. That is one of the things which I truly enjoy on your history I wish you stay in good health

ch 101 Chapter 101- an innocent’s fault

Harry Potter but AU???

Book&Literature · DAFR

Halo345

3yr

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As an idea for a for a new Quirk: You can convert sun light or another type of energy in life force. That way you could recharge faster your life force and you can also make stronger quirk "cheaper" by building in that it uses life force as fuel

ch 28 Chapter 27 – Interview