Yeah. The author seems to love terrorizing her Heroine
ch 450 Goodbye
Fantasy · Proteety_Promi
Correct, "what is the mark on your 'MARK' to " What is the mark on your 'BACK'"
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Fantasy · Proteety_Promi
Somehow, I had great expectations for this story. Maybe, I shouldn't have, because I'm beginning to dislike the turn out greatly. The female lead keeps going from one toxic relationship and circumstances to another. And saying she has all that inert power but can't use it is useless! 🙄
If I was not here, Lloid would come here. I caught him trying to do something funny when she was sleeping, so since then, I had been staying so he would not. Father did not care whether Lloid or anyone else did something horrible to her. He only wanted her to be able to use her power.
Fantasy · Proteety_Promi
It's enough, please. How much torture do you want to inflict on your female lead already, author? Hasn't she been through enough?
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Fantasy · Proteety_Promi
Edgar looked in the direction the innkeeper pointed at and found a young woman smiling more than she should at him. "She doesn't look like you or her mother. She does resemble the butcher next door. Good day."
History · Violet_167
I love their friendship... so clownish 🤡 🤡
"It's a start," Erin excitedly clapped her hands. The real fun was beginning now that Alessandra agreed to buy one. One meant that it had to be the sexiest one she could find. Erin imagined Edgar knocking on her door the next day with a carriage full of money to thank her and then she would be able to move out of her mother's home. "The next time we return I will get you to buy two new ones. Start undressing."
History · Violet_167
Buhahahaaaa... 😂😂😂 That'll be in Mars. I'm yet to see such on earth here
"Something to make a man get on his knees and follow every command his woman gives him," Erin ordered instead of Alessandra.
History · Violet_167
Really Crazy!
"What?!" Erin exclaimed loud enough to catch the attention of the people passing by on the outside. "You mean to tell me you are free to buy whatever the hell you want today and you invited us along with you? Ladies and our one gentleman, let's make this a day we will never forget."
History · Violet_167
Someone has a name... CLUELESS! 😁
"Was that what he was expecting?"
History · Violet_167
please Correct typo, *she will TIME UP with me* to correct usage *she will TEAM UP with me*
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History · Violet_167
When it is nothing, there's always just something
"It's just… Nothing. I just don't like the way he looks at me. I don't know if he looks at everyone that way… Forget that. You said you will join your very first meeting today."
Fantasy · Proteety_Promi
It should be ABEL here not FLINT, I guess, since she's talking to Abel who was with her here now.
"Can I ask you something, Flint?" I asked after a while.
Fantasy · Proteety_Promi
The first line should read "I am taking care of myself" not "I am not taking care of myself"
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Fantasy · Proteety_Promi
I don't like that she repeats this over again. It's not as if it was real. Anyway, in real life, this sort of accusation ruins relationship because it is unjust accusation and will makes the other person feel he or she is not trusted
"Don't cheat on me," I warned.
Fantasy · Proteety_Promi
Why is she so negative? Even her thought pattern is so
"You mean I have a bad nature?"
Fantasy · Proteety_Promi
I thought I read the mother's name as Audrey??? 😨
I’d pretended to leave town earlier. Had that Wolf person not come after me, I would’ve laid low in the next town over until the dust settled. Then I was coming back to take care of her once and for all and take my woman with me. Celine. My heart ached just from not seeing her face.
Urban · Jordan Silver
Total manipulation!
Why hadn’t I thought of that before I let things get this out of hand? Now it was too late and he was sending me away. When he kissed my hair at the backdoor of the car I bawled even harder.
General · Jordan Silver
I saw it WITH own two eyes, not IN my own two... Please, correct 👆
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Fantasy · Proteety_Promi
Pfft! This Jesylin self
"Stop screaming with your messages, my phone will go deaf, ah." Jeslyn joked.
Contract Marriage: The Replacement Groom
Urban · Hassy_101