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Funny how you word it as if this site isn't a pirate site at first and still is a pirate site, just because some corporations gives out contracts doesn't make 'em any less of one. Shame on you for having inability to accept a bit of criticism.

Not even worth a try when you suck ass with grammar. It's lightning not lightening, the former is the electricity that strike from the cloud the latter is when I drain your bloods from your useless body to make you "light"-er and easier to dump.

First few chapters is good, it's a good way to show what your character is by throwing them into a scenario it's pretty common solving too, he's quick on the head and feet and most importantly he's driven, yet the power he gained and the title of this book give me some sort of misgiving. First book adventure I loved it, gives a vibe of epic adventure where we as the reader are constantly on edge of our seats with pretty well structured and built adventure, there's a goal, struggle, team works, all the basic ingredients you will ever need and the endings of the book 1 is brilliant if not bit rushed. On book 2 tho.... Why? They changed, all of them without any logical or needed build up or changes what so ever the mc and fc1 is most glaring, the writer tried to justify it by telling they "rub off each other's" what kind of rubbing switch the characters of 2 person? The male from egoistical, bit quiet & driven into not so egoistical, caring and submissive, also a simp(out of nowhere) the female just somehow gain 20 years worth of spite and angst which turn her into some bad rendition of Cersei, or Daenerys or whatever is on list of angry western female characters. And the blind girl? Not even half a plot device. Honestly is the first book fake? And with how I read other review that the title turn into reality it's just, not worth it. So sorry if I want my MC to be bit more driven, and self-respecting. And those who call names just because others rate this lower than 4.5+ you're just a foolish, childish, pathetic c*nt that just burnt off eating the same shit you have in this junk filled site and somehow it makes you feel you're better, not fun-fact: you're not, dumbass.

I want to shit on this novel so badly but I fear the author with his handsome face and perfect body will meet me, flick his cigarettes to my eye and beat me while his girls cheering on him and then they'll purr and caress his tattoo filled body while lighting his cigarette as he tells me how much of a piece of shit this commenter is. Holy shit I've been dying out of shame and cringe writing that much yet you can constantly write those things for more than 100+ chapters talk about talent or perhaps you just don't have any shame.... Well it won't matter at all as this comment along with other similar with low ratings will be deleted as that's how this site and most of its writer works and however good he thinks he write the character he's still a pussy for deleting this.