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ch 26 Chapter 25 Stand Off

New worlds

New worlds

Fantasy · MyumaraOri

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This is an average cultivation novel hidden (badly) in European clothes. You have everything: a MC that is 'really mature and cruel and intelligent for his age' and that has multiple OP cheats, a random beautiful woman that is impressed by the MC, a young master that enters in a conflict with the MC that escalates quickly: Basically the young master and his gang try bullying the MC, saying that he's a fool an being quite annoying, even phisically. So what does the MC do? Does he make fun of them with some wordplay? Does he threateningly tell them to stop? Does he reason with them and seek support from a teacher? Nah he f*cking punches the young master until he bleeds. Then he proceeds saying things like: "if I didn't hit him he would've continued" earning the admiration of the beautiful woman. Maturity 999/100 Of course the young master continues (mission failed successfully) and brings... his father in! Bruh. Of course the MC hides his strength and connections so that the father feels superior. He half-pays half-threathens the MC into submission and, surprise! The MC was hiding his strength all along. Luckily it doesn't end in a bloodbath (for now), but it is still s*upid. Still, people who like 'righteous' vengeance will love this Then there are things like the fact that the MC excessively hids his talent so that he won't receive resources, but whatever. Now, let's see how it differs from the standard cultivation novel. First of all the MC instead of using willpower, he uses the much better 'method'. That's how he justifies his arrogance. Then bloodlines are called 'spirit talents'. Then Qi is called magic. Finally nobody ever says cultivation and instead says 'absorb divine power' or things like that. Another issue I found are the little holes in worldbuilding like the fact that the MC has a better meditation technique (but like by a s*upidly huge margin) because 'on Earth they had 2000 years to develop it', while on this planet only 300. Well, on Earth your entire existence doesn't revolve around the fact that you're able to better meditate, while there goddamnit, it does! In these 300 years meditation techniques would have made huge strides since everyone would research them since ther damn livelihood would depend on it! But maybe I'm being too harsh: the characters aren't too bad, they're semi-realistic and it is quite enjoyable to read. Still it isn't on the same level of Lord of the Mysteries. By a large margin. By sasso

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