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DarkEvangeli: 2.6m views but only 130+ reviews. I smell the scent of deleted reviews.

I read over 30 chapters and the mc is insufferable and idiotic. The mc is wary of people's attitude in the apocalypse , if they gave in to their deep desires. But the MC is the one I see that changed since the apocalypse. He turned idiotic and crazy not only that but thinking about making out and having sex with girls he only knows for couple days and already refers to them as his wives. Not mention how he treats them as trophies and doesn't even ask their opinion before treating them as his already.

Stronghold In The Apocalypse
16 hours ago

TheGentlemenWorld: This.... is possibly of the most **** tier stories I've ever read. And that's saying a lot considering that I've books where the MC goes after boys AND girls at the same time. Females? What are those? Aren't they just holes for the MC to **** and abandon? No joke, that is pretty much this story's moto...

Fairy System In Fairy Tail
2 days ago

Aikaya: Zod was trained, he had more muscle mass before being enhanced by the sun

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C9
4 days ago
I’m not saying it was a bad scene or anything I’m just pointing out that he literally just stopped, he was raised around scientist and military personal on Krypton, getting hit by what would feel like rubber rounds likely wouldn’t be the type of thing to make him literally freeze up when a innocent child is in danger. From what we have seen of him so far plus the behavior of the “House of El” means he would put protecting the innocent child above his own fears. I really enjoy the story and am excited about the daily uploads I just wanted to mention this chapter felt like a really odd reaction from the MC both from what we have seen from him thus far in this story and his family on kryptons normal behavior. It felt more like an attempt to make it so Gambit would have to step in then anything else. I get wanting to move the story along and such but John shouldn’t have really had any reason to need help, even with him still gaining his powers day by day due to prolonged exposure it felt like he was suddenly nerfed for this chapter. View More

crywolfseven: With the average speed he moves at his thinking and reflexes would also be greatly enhanced. To the point that even freezing up he would still react very quickly. Yet he just stood there thinking about what is going on? I mean he ran without much more than a bare thought about maintaining a relatively human speed to get there, through a guy through a brick wall and broke another’s arm. Then he took like two bullets to the chest and just apparently stopped all his forward motion and stood there while they shot him some more. I really enjoy the story but this would be the equivalent of you or I standing a foot away from someone moving in slow motion as they raise a weapon up and slowly aim it at us and just standing there or for anyone who is a fan of futurama the scene where Hermès Conrad is being charged by a giant prehistoric sloth and stands in place and screams for like 5 minutes as it slowly charges at him.

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C9
4 days ago

Guad: Breaks a man’s arm then proceeds to monologue about the accuracy of the others while standing still like a dumbas.s ! Nice!

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C9
4 days ago
With the average speed he moves at his thinking and reflexes would also be greatly enhanced. To the point that even freezing up he would still react very quickly. Yet he just stood there thinking about what is going on? I mean he ran without much more than a bare thought about maintaining a relatively human speed to get there, through a guy through a brick wall and broke another’s arm. Then he took like two bullets to the chest and just apparently stopped all his forward motion and stood there while they shot him some more. I really enjoy the story but this would be the equivalent of you or I standing a foot away from someone moving in slow motion as they raise a weapon up and slowly aim it at us and just standing there or for anyone who is a fan of futurama the scene where Hermès Conrad is being charged by a giant prehistoric sloth and stands in place and screams for like 5 minutes as it slowly charges at him. View More
Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C9
4 days ago
Not quite, there has been mentions in comics about non human mutants. Some were created artificially but some were just born that way. Apparently there are even some animals that have had the X Gene activate. View More

Ruined_Leprechaun: X gene is only there for humans...

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C8
5 days ago

Guad: Is it just me or did the grammar take a nose dive this chapter...

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C8
5 days ago

Amir_Blumenfeld: im confused
why did emilia say that grant knits alot, when she was telling them not to mess with him? Knitting isnt a particularly scary skill to have.
and also, why did grant call her 'Hot Emilia' and no1 reacted, as if that is a normal thing to call somebody?

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C8
5 days ago
This chapter had several lines that didn’t make a lot of sense, like the part about not getting in a fight because he knits. Was it because he has dexterity or something that it was mentioned? Also several of what people called each other was a bit strange like the “Hot Camila” line. It wasn’t even said like he was flirting but like it was actually her name. I’m interested in the story obviously since I have posted on each chapter lately but I am a bit confused about what is going on with some of what they say. View More
Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C8
5 days ago
Gambit is a cool charecter plus I like you didn’t go overboard to phonetically add in the creole accent like some authors do. That gets annoying and tough to read I like how instead you seem to have based a OC off Gambit so you can do what you want with him. View More
Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C7
6 days ago

ApexAssasSIN: Well he did come through a portal with Krypto, so it's possible some radioactive rocks from Krypton came with them as well, into their new universe. Who knows what the author will do though.

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C6
6 days ago

ApexAssasSIN: Do you know if Krypto will get a power boost under a blue sun, like a normal Kryptonian? It'd be a pretty funny thing to happen, just imagining a god like dog lol.

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C6
6 days ago
Hmm not that is an interesting question. One of the main origins of krypto (the other being krypto is a shapeshifter from another dimension that Clark saves and decided to follow him) is that all beings from Kypton gain powers under the yellow sun. Thus I guess if it’s that origin then he likely would. He blue sun powers are insane I mean he even could gift kryptonian powers to normal humans at will. I guess we will need to see it would be very interesting. That is a very good question. View More

ApexAssasSIN: Do you know if Krypto will get a power boost under a blue sun, like a normal Kryptonian? It'd be a pretty funny thing to happen, just imagining a god like dog lol.

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C6
6 days ago

Jasonenrick: Imagine a Clark Kent but more Intelligent in the Marvel Universe hahaa gg ;).
Come Thanos who do you want to **** with ;)

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C6
1 week ago

MustacheNinja737: Thanks for the chapter~~😄👍

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C6
1 week ago
Just looked it up, apparently some could use magic but were very rare even before the planets destruction so I apologize I had misspoken. View More

RenzMarvin: I hope he will be a bit OverPowered later on.
And, will he learn to use either chi or magic?? I think that would be interesting. XD

Thanks for the Chapter. I like this novel. XD

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C6
1 week ago
I don’t know if a krytonian can use magic and their “normal” powers at once. I have had it explained in the past that a kryptonians powers come from their bodies producing a energy field around themselves that they subconsciously use for flight, enhanced strength etc and kryptonite and magic essentially disrupt that energy field. So if that is true then if Superman used magic himself he would be weakening his own energy field. That could all be wrong as they have retconned so much over the years but the normal idea is they absorb sunlight into their bodies I don’t think they would be able to properly affect other forms of energy such as chi. View More

RenzMarvin: I hope he will be a bit OverPowered later on.
And, will he learn to use either chi or magic?? I think that would be interesting. XD

Thanks for the Chapter. I like this novel. XD

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C6
1 week ago

LordSatan666: I like it I feel like establishing a couple more chapters till mc is about 16 then the avengers stuff happen

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C6
1 week ago
If you never saw Young Justice and this cant compare with either Superboy or Wolf just think of Krypto having roughly 75% of the strength and invulnerability and speed that Superman has. That should be close enough to his cannon strength in most stories though again his senses would be on an unimaginable level. Think the difference in strength between a human and Superman then just consider that a dogs senses were jacked as high from their already high base level that Superman strength is from a base humans. I’m talking hearing a screaming from states away wouldn’t even likely be tough to understand for him. View More

shashank_bhatt: If Krypto is going to be as powerful as his master then he won't have to worry about his parents being unsafe right.

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C6
1 week ago
If I remember correctly he isn’t nearly as strong as a full blooded kryptonian under our sun would be but his already strong senses that a dog would have are exponentially higher. That said he is still extremely strong and durable. If I remember correctly think wolf from Young Justice but two or three times as strong View More

shashank_bhatt: If Krypto is going to be as powerful as his master then he won't have to worry about his parents being unsafe right.

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C6
1 week ago
This is a pretty great chapter, thanks! View More
Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C6
1 week ago
Well looks like I’ll have to be on the lookout for your next story then, I do greatly enjoy marvel fanfics. View More

ApexAssasSIN: I never really thought about that, and considering that Joh-El did live for 14 years on Krypton, he should have a considerably hard time adjusting to the atmosphere of Earth. Nice spot, I almost forgot about the whole Red Star thing. And thinking about Professor X and the Ancient One, makes me think of other things, like are we really on that Earth? Maybe we can be on the Earth where the only 'Super Person' I guess, would be Mad Jim Jaspers. Dang, I'm having some ideas for a story coming up, imma go jot some stuff down real quick.

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C5
1 week ago

ApexAssasSIN: I never really thought about that, and considering that Joh-El did live for 14 years on Krypton, he should have a considerably hard time adjusting to the atmosphere of Earth. Nice spot, I almost forgot about the whole Red Star thing. And thinking about Professor X and the Ancient One, makes me think of other things, like are we really on that Earth? Maybe we can be on the Earth where the only 'Super Person' I guess, would be Mad Jim Jaspers. Dang, I'm having some ideas for a story coming up, imma go jot some stuff down real quick.

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C5
1 week ago
I’m wondering how the MC even knew about a humans top speed on day one on earth. View More

Greedward: Um... wiki is telling me that Usain Bolt's top speed was 44,72 km/h so what's up with that guy you talked about.

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C5
1 week ago
The weakness to lead was only an issue for the Daxamites. They were a group that had escaped the destruction of krypton and so Brainiac tampered with them to make them weak to one of the more common substances in existence in order to ensure they would never be able to spread from their new planet since they would risk death by lead poisoning constantly. View More

shashank_bhatt: The story development is quite good and since they're is no kryptonite in this world then the MC will only have to look it for lead poisoning which isn't something above will think of..... Maybe I don't know??

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C5
1 week ago
If I could offer some advice I would say that everything so far feels a bit too... I guess bare bones is the closest word for it. I mean he shows up on earth and can breath perfectly, then his powers start to kick in and he’s almost instantly got a rather good control of them, then he just so happens to run into a nice farm family instead of any of the countless beings who would sense his magical arrival, the he just so happens to speak the same language, then they just so happen to have lost a son 14 years ago and all but cut themselves always from the world so nobody would know their John didn’t survive allowing the MC to take over, then they offer him a spot in the family after like 10 minutes worth of talking.

Basically I’m saying that the story feels more like a story outline at the moment then an actual story. This isn’t meant to be insulting, the outline is much harder then going back and filling out the story to have more detail and less just happenstance where everything just boils down to luck or magic. I mean come on we know that earth has people like The Ancient One, Professor Xavier who are highly sensitive telepaths and can sense sudden changes and people like shield who would likely pick up some kind of changes in the energy readings since he litterally just popped up in their reality. I’m just saying,

I look forward to where this story will go from here and hopefully now that we’re passed the myriad of impossibilities that brought him to earth and got him adopted (which I admit is rather tough to write in) I’m hoping that the rest of the story will be more flushed out. I mean like I said I accept it would be very hard to introduce the MC to a family on earth without making several impossible things happen so I’m more then willing to give all that a pass and just basically count everything before this chapter as a prologue that is a bit rushed in order to get into the story. I really hope this doesn’t come off as insults or complaints I am trying to offer constructive criticism. Since again I understand how difficult it can be to get into a story when you’re doing a crossover. View More
Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C5
1 week ago

HaremGodZ: Literally nothing has happened so far in this fanfic.

Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C5
1 week ago
Why do they have a full size bed in johns room if he died shortly after childbirth? View More
Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C4
1 week ago

ArchieElite: I don’t care who he’s paired with as long as the story doesn’t revolve into a senseless harem fanfic. Love the story so far though.

Marvel: Loki · C4
1 month ago
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