crystalfire

2yr

Commented

ugh, he was unique because he couldn't talk

"What's happening–" before he could even finish, he cut himself off. He opened his mouth, lips trembling as he tried to speak again. "H-Hello?"

Fantasy · Peltivierre

2yr

Commented

Based on the next few paragraphs this notification occurs before he actually kills the kobold. Should probably be reorganized.

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Games · Cloakedinshadow

2yr

Replied to kindle1667

they could choose to take one at the end for something better

???

Games · NightWind

3yr

Posted

A well written story. Grammer is more than satisfactory, especially in comparison to most of the novels on this site. Enjoyable monster tamer novel.

Fantasy · RoadBlock92

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