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enjoy bro u deserve it

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You could get some ideas from other novels. by my pov vahn main issue is his harem and his helping nature (just like baam and team wolf pack by helping them a little is well and good). he should minimize his helping nature (by giving them weapons, skills, upgrading constitution and done with them). and if you want to show some of the tragic scene then you should pick up a best one like his race is extinct. and about harem my personal opinion is stop adding more girls and help existing harem members grow more power. and the choice will be like some of the hot headed (yuri, ureka, nobunaga) some the battle maniac (mushashi, eva, shadow queen I guess I forgot her name the one who trains vahn like hell in 2nd arc) some of the weak should train with him by not living him. or by exploring on their own for some time. I don't have a brain to think about eternity and all but I think they should resolve themselves or end it in a good stand. vahn have a journey for like till teir 9 maybe he will get hurt for a certain period of time and he will eventually move on. some the more resolve one should be with him we read a lot in some novel a goddess or saint is waiting for his love to get reincarnated or get strong and be with him. they can wait or have their resolves so why can't these harem girls. and by working hard and resolving themselves they have a right to be with him. otherwise their is going to be other rachel

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