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FeatherLitePen: I thought there would be something new or different since the premise was that Soma the Mc got proper training from around the world. from a young age. In the end it was still a copy and paste from the main story.
Even with the Relationship with Soma and Erina did not change the story one bit.Shokugeki: The Demon Chef
LelouchLamperouge_: Honestly, I don’t understand why this novel has such a good mark, I’m not going to impose my opinion on others, I’ll just express my point of view, firstly the main character is "empty" very similar to those stupid guys from second-rate anime and fanfiction, absolutely stupid desires, characters are not they are very similar to themselves from the original, there is no ditalization of the world, the main character is not good and not evil, he is just "empty", he does not have any original desires or plans, plus he is an incredible hypocrite (if you do not understand why, I will not explain).
P.S as I said, I’m not going to impose my opinion on anyone, also my comment does not intend to offend the author, readers or this work, I just expressed my opinion.Me and My Farm in Attack on Titan
RavenClock: Could you pleas add some vampire diaries or **** wolf or twilight good siMy Self-Insert Stash · C300
Gahara: the jade emperor is so crazy op that if MC ever lose i will quit.. he can literaly trow planets just with telekinesis, he can control electromagnetism (Ligh,radiation,electricity), if he use friction, velocity, togheter he can make attacks that cant be blocked..... plus his walking stick can make him teleport to other dimensions............
AND THE LIST KEEPS GOING... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK GOOD MANThe Jade emperor of naruto · C14
apexheavengodking: Ikr in the original the only reason jade emperor lost to mori jin was because as he grew older his power deteriorated he could not even access most of his abilities.The Jade emperor of naruto · C14
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Deus_Rex: Thanks for the chapter. The way you blend in serious commentary and schemes with lighthearted sections and humor is amazing. Keep up the good work.The Muggleborn Conspiracy · C76
MH_Junior: Thanks for the chap!
Man, i really envy your well-write style. Hope you write new fanfics.
I'm trying to write one to improve my English. If you have any time, i would love to have your reviewThe Muggleborn Conspiracy · C76
Dio_Lupus: Thanks for chapterGrandpa Universe In Multiverse · C114
ErozothDraeor: I hope his powers when eventually facing the enemies will not disappoint. OP is the way! But seriously, when I think back to when he started school and how strong he was he should be beyond anyone else at the moment.The Muggleborn Conspiracy · C75
HankeyThePoo24: thx now I won't post anymore review in the comment section.The Pride of the Uzumaki Clan [Long Chapters]
HankeyThePoo24: So the author keeps deleting my review because it was unsatisfactory to him. I guess this will be the new one. Hopefully, he won't delete this. 77th time the charm.
The story was good at the start, MC was strong, he was the special one. Then he decides to add an OC which is suddenly as strong as MC if not stronger with how MC is at a disadvantage in the first meeting. that was one of the things that turn me off from this story.
Also if you write something that even remotely disagrees with the author, you are low IQ.
If you like other novels more than this one, you are low IQ.
If you like harem novel, you are low IQ. (this I agree)
If you don't agree that other authors on this website are trash and only author is the good one, you guessed it, you are low IQ.
The author seems to think that highly of himself (imagine supreme leader san). He continuously threatens his own reader that if a comment that he dont like get the top likes, he will drop the novel (imagine supreme leader killing citizen that diss him).
In conclusion if you read this novel, you are low IQ and author is certainly not beta like all the other author here that take criticism or negative comment well. I hope this satisfies your demand supreme leader san. This is definitely not 1 sentence review. you have terrible attitude and its fun to rile you up ;).
P.S. this is copied somewhere so that I can copy-paste this easily if you so decide to delete this to maintain your definitely genuine 5.0 review score ;).The Pride of the Uzumaki Clan [Long Chapters]
BobOfSomething: You should add what the fanfiction is about in the prologue then the chapters. .............................................................Stories from Fanfiction.net
Slesk: I tried for a bit, I truly did. But the translation to English seems to be so-so and I just can't get into it despite really wanting to like it. I wish someone would edit and clean up the fic so that I didn't have to read stuff like:
"The bad is not broken enough. The net price reduction is against Harry Potter. Father is also a good looking wall."
What even is this? What does it mean? Just reading the first chapter left me with a bitter taste from such nonsensical sentences. Anyways either fix up the confusing sentences or get an editor to do it for you.Harry Potter's Natural Villain
Ninjaprojekt: This fan-fic is good, but it follows the main story too much. Soma in this story is set to be a OP character with the training since he was young but he is still on the level you can compare him to the anime. If you look at it on a nutshell Soma is slightly more OP than the anime and we get that love- ******* between him and Erina, that we didn't get in both anime and manga.
I appraisers this fan-fic but it will be better if the author have more of originality to the story.Shokugeki: The Demon Chef
tekite: If you are absolutely bored, read this. All things aside the writing quality and updates are pretty good on this platform. It started off great, and I thought this would be my favorite novel at the moment. But once canon started, it was just lazy, boring and repetitive. Literally no difference from the original manga and anime. Actually, Soma's talent and skills seem even worse than the canon, cause he achieved all those stuff in the anime without any of the training or expetience he had in this novel. But, in this novel, he had all those training and travelling, but still didnt improve a SINLGE bit. Romance is a little better in that it might keep you reading for a while longer, but I cannot take it anymore. Its just painful. It feels like a copy and paste.Shokugeki: The Demon Chef
TianXia: This is basically just the original **** form the manga, there is barely and change other then few new dialogs, knows most characters and Erina teasing there is nothing new about it. Soma should be better than other people when he when on training with his dad, but there is no change with his cooking. The whole story so far just going with the original manga did, with bare minimum change.Shokugeki: The Demon Chef
CarlosSalazar: Besides SomaxErina moments it's just cannon, no improvment in the story at all. Read if you want but don't expect anything amazing, just a good read..............................................Shokugeki: The Demon Chef
JohnDeuz: Your version of Soma have a lot of potential because you made him wander the world with his father. But you decide to Nerf him when he return, that put me off a bit... so for now I'll just give you 2.4 stars until i see some progress...Shokugeki: The Demon Chef
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callumdunn1: I feel it would struggle to become popular because of the subject matter maybe go with someone from a bit further back in history but good luck all the same.Grandpa Universe In Multiverse · C112
TrapsAreBest: It was in a way a political statement, it is also very likely that Barty was going to immediately run away after having his plan ruined.The Muggleborn Conspiracy · C73
Invisiblevoice: I strongly agree. Barty Jr is a guy who does not care about innocent students, actually, being near them to make them his meat shield sounds like the kind of thing he would do; so i can't help but think Alex move was stupid, attacking somebody who doesn't care with so many of his precious students present. He should have waited until he got out of the great hall to try to take him down, then the students would have been safe and without panic.The Muggleborn Conspiracy · C73
ErozothDraeor: Agreed, this was not Alex acting. This was the author forcing things so the plot matches what he wanted.The Muggleborn Conspiracy · C73
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