You take a long time on the romantic side of the story. I thought it would be a light novel more focus on the martial arts side.
Continue it. Write until the end of the war at least. It is a great story, just surprise by the time skip.
let zhao feng live but make Zhao Wei ignore him and when they cross pass, use him for his own benefice
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Book&Literature · OneArmedImmortal
1 is a good idea
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by scanning Thor, will he get his lightning power or will he get his own asgardian power ?
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Anime & Comics · dragon_guy
it will be hard to chose make him finally win a national championship and destroying the plot or make him lose without him losing his motivation.
+1
Naruto: Transmigrated as an Uchiha
Anime & Comics · NoviceAuthor