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My first impression; a unique novel with the MC starting as a parasite, how cool is that? I quickly got disapointed becuse of the excessive amount of hypocrisy within this novel. One red flag is already on the synopsis "MC is a hypocrite, deal with it" a poor attempt to justify the bad quality of the novel. The novel itself is the definition of hipocrite. A succesful CEO, a large amount of Intelligence and wisdom stats? Where can I see that? Betrayed by his partner and got tortured resulting to great hatred and distrust to any person, what did he do? Get another partner that he just met. Violeted a rule by interfering in match, yet when he's the one who experience it "shocked pikachu face." I just need to drop this.

[*SPOILER!!!*] I’m venting from chapter 310ish regarding defeating “Bai Xiaosheng” aka the biggest enemy in the test. A test where 186 students are scattered through out a chosen terrain something similar to a”volcanic” Island which is the most dangerous among the “maps.” There are two opposing groups in this test namely the “repeaters” and the “new students,” this is an individual test, but they could group up and they have a team chat “enabled”, but again they are scattered through out the “dangerous” map. Here our MC, Su Hao, have the power to map the whole terrain and see each individuals in the map, through some communications, the MC is able to group up the whole new student group while the repeaters remains scattered. Now here is where the MC advertised as a “bookworm” smart person, Him, Su Hao’s stupidity shows up, he actually lead his group to battle the STRONGEST ENEMY which in result lost 74 lives with only 6 remaining in order to defeat the enemy. Even a common person could come up with a plan to eliminate the weakest enemy first before the strongest Aka the strategy called “Defeat in detail,” a strategy to defeat a larger enemy army that works by splitting the enemy into small groups then battling them with superior quantity even tho the enemy has much more troops, while detaching some troops in order to decieve the other small groups of the enemy(this requires high mobility). This MC actually choose the other way that it infuriates me >:[

for me, this novel is just like a “meh” but better than others. Mc is looking like a fanatic in my view.

Good for new readers, but Its quality Is’nt that high, it’s above average. I thought this would be a very logical novel because of the MC being a mech designer that requires logic. As the story goes on, it’s becoming more of being a fanatical story. sigh...

This review is not for readers but for the author. This novel is for new readers who like OP things. I have developed my own taste and this novel doesn't suit me. My initial expectations were high, but as I read through it, it fails me. The author here is, I'll term it "new", I get it he/she is a student. The novel is a world building dream fantasy of the author for me. there're many things to nitpick here. The writing quality and logic here is "ok and bad". I'll start with my thoughts reading through this novel. first chapters, system is a complete cheat tool, plot armor is really high. the story is/feels like the whole plot armor. sytems heals MC and makes him strong. MC profession is completely irrelevant. I don't know how did the MC mastered the knowledge he got. story makes him like a veteran hero just by some experience of two years. love development sucks, author slaps a pretty caring girl and calls it a day. characters feels like lifeless. the author does not excel in Expression and explanations. Never heard a king of an empire, there are other words used in here wrong. etc.... this seems to be a hate comment, but I couldn't really think of something to praise on. here are some world building novels that I may recommend for the author/readers to read. -Tales of the reincarnated lord. why did it finished early!!! -Hail the king. early part -The World Online. love this one -Amber sword, sad it's not updating. -release that witch. not my taste but still good.

Poor ass going for prostitutes.