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Já sei o que vai acontecer, porque devo continuar lendo?

Is his mother an idiot?

And now he's going to give himself to the world, in an abrupt way, just to make the script easier.

A idéia parecia boa, mas até agora a execução está muito confusa, acho que vou parar por aqui... Esperava mais dessa história :(

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When I read a good story, I put myself in the protagonist's shoes, so I feel angry with the other characters when they do something stupid (even though he have reasons for that). I think the people who criticized think similar to me, but that's not to say the characters are sloppy, or anything else bad. It's just us, being hot-blooded protagonists!

The story started out very well, the protagonist acted like a normal person, and defended his will even when he was in front of cultivators, but with the introduction of these ancestors, the protagonist simply follows whatever plan they decide for him, the ancestor speaks and he keep quiet (not to mention, in this chapter, that she spoke out loud and he immediately shut up)...................................... ................ The relationship with these women trivialized the future relationship with his mother, in my opinion the conflict he had was the special part of this story. Of course, that's just my opinion, and even then the story is still ok.

Vlad

Victor is addicted to battles, I think he is a Sayajin.

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