Othman_Daughter - Profile

It’s a good title but too much explaination . So much details make your stories little bit fuss and boring . Please edit your stories and remove unnecessary details . That details make reader lost your true stories line. Like what u want reader to imagine this scenario, this character . Thanks🌻 😉

why always talk about love ? and always repeat the same thing ? it's good plot and you keep pinpoint only about love ..and not match with other stories lastly to many characters one at time..u want this character feel like a princess but after 6 or 8 chapter your stories change , this character so humble ,use things like ordinary student ? even this character is stalker? when you said this character just go and back from school not social ? this character not go to party but have birthday party event plus have a boyfriend? and her boyfriend cheating with her best friend but you tell she not have friend but suddenly have one friend and i think she not who with cheating boyfriend..your stories simply not matching 🙂 please upgraded ..tq

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until this chapter i just don't get it... why? just why? when she with first ml she thinks,dreams,act like she love about the second ml ,when she with second ml she thinks about the first ml just when that she supposed to move on? why she so selfish? just thinking about herself only..when did she realize there someone that truly love her inside and outside of her without question? the past is the past ...most importantly people that help you,love you whenever u need help now ...just focus on the future... don't look back your past because your past regret will waiver your will in your future .