The ending, lol.
ch 75 chapter 75
LGBT+ · Lucia_Daniels
Interesting, although the sentences could be more fluid. Some editing would help. As for the content. For someone so greedy that even gods (or whatever) noticed, the descriptions sound more like an average rich man. Probably because nothing specific was mentioned. Maybe an addition like his children didn't love him, but what should he expect since each had a different mother, half of whom he discarded as superfluous extras while the other half only got the minimum a millionaire's spawn should have. From his point of view, they were unnecessary expenses on HIS resources. And now He was a superfluous timekeeper on the inheritance. Unfortunately, there was no way to bury everything he had with him, as some Farron. Since from his point of view, everything he had should be his, even in death. No one had a right to inherit his greed. But even if he hid all his wealth, someone would find it within 24 hours of his death. The obstacle of technology. Or something like that. Greed is greed. Greed worthy of the attention of a supernatural being should be even more explosive. Right now he sounds like an old fart who was big in the past, but now a nobody. Look at "Saw" movies. The old guy, old and sick, near death, showed the world his greed to control death and life. Besides, what's up with the old lady who turns into a young, beautiful woman? From her dialogs, it appears that she dislikes him. And yet she flaunts her breasts to please him? "Under her pointy black hat was an alluring beauty that Sakim himself found his heart wanting to jump out from his chest. " Strange. Even if that was her true appearance, she would have no reason to show it. The scene was like, look, I am not old, I am good looking for you to have wet dreams, he he he.... She transformed from an unknown powerful being with unknown motivations to... To a woman sent by someone else powerful to warm the bed of a potential client. Now she is worth no more than her bo0bs.
ch 0 2 Vessel Of The Greed Sin
Games · Jimar_Jemar
I have a question. Why does Noah, who supposedly used his brains to survive, sneaks around with only a knife? No traps, no decoys, no lures, no other clever ways to fight. He simply fought the same way others did. The best way to compare it is that he thinks he's a wizard, when in reality he's a rogue who fights like a warrior, without rogue tricks. He sneaks, finds a single rat, and then fights like everyone else with a knife... No dirty or imaginative tricks or anything to show that he really survived because of his intelligence. Right now he appears smart just because everyone else is dumbed down. So what if they have powers, if 50% of people die in the first few years, I would not put my ass on the line just to feel cocky. Besides, even if they did have teenager braindead syndrome, their parents would kick their asses in shape. It almost seems like the people of the world do not care if their kids die. The writers had surrounded MC with stupid, unreal teenagers just to make him seem smarter and more *****. At this point, our world has more safety precautions when climbing mountains than in that world have when dungeon diving. Author, just because MC is the smartest person among dumb people, doesn't make us readers think MC is smart. It only makes MC a king of monkeys.
ch 0 9 09 - Super Boss
Fantasy · Zhanye
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