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if you have any respect for Arthur, you better save Bradley from tb.You hold the fate of the 'Poor Man's Arthur Morgan' in your hands.

Bradley, seven feet tall, mighty strong man. He never looked as vulnerable as he did at that moment. He lifted his face and looked Sylvester in the eyes. "I'm afraid… Or was afraid of what will come next after I die — Hell? Then I met the Archbishop, who suggested I just start helping people for no reason."

I Became The Pope, Now What?

I Became The Pope, Now What?

Fantasy · MisterImmortal

ThomasEdison
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The author stole this plot from RDR2.HEAR ME AUTHOR, you can make the plot the same but you can never make me show any empathy for Bradley.For he is no Arthur Morgan, Arthur was the one and only.

Bradley, seven feet tall, mighty strong man. He never looked as vulnerable as he did at that moment. He lifted his face and looked Sylvester in the eyes. "I'm afraid… Or was afraid of what will come next after I die — Hell? Then I met the Archbishop, who suggested I just start helping people for no reason."

I Became The Pope, Now What?

I Became The Pope, Now What?

Fantasy · MisterImmortal

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Difference is that Jujtsu kaisen's blood manipulation still has some ounce of science. Our Author has entered and thrown science out the window as soon as the novel started. 3rd rated novel. Read Release that Witch much better then this bad novel.

It was well known that emotions affect the cardiovascular system of the human body to a certain extent. The greater the stress, the greater the amount of blood pumped by the heart, thus increasing circulation as a consequence. Then, Bai Zemin came up with a slightly crazy idea... Was it possible that in some sense the blood circulation inside the body could affect the emotions a bit?

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · XIETIAN

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And Blood manipulation is stupid power. You should have given him a Water based power. with water he can still control blood as blood consist of 90% water. Author is not well versed in basic science. That is why you are writing books. I normally dont care but you just went into technical details.

It was well known that emotions affect the cardiovascular system of the human body to a certain extent. The greater the stress, the greater the amount of blood pumped by the heart, thus increasing circulation as a consequence. Then, Bai Zemin came up with a slightly crazy idea... Was it possible that in some sense the blood circulation inside the body could affect the emotions a bit?

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · XIETIAN

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deluge means "A sever flood" or "Overwhelming flood". Google FTW.

The rain was falling as if a deluge had beaten down on the world. The sound of the water drops hitting the window pane was soothing, but he could not appreciate the benefit.

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · XIETIAN

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author, you are showing mc as a brilliant guy who thinks and learns and uses everything efficiently. why would a barons child marry a commoner where he can marry into a big family and acquire much wealth and obviously more beautiful life there. he can find love in higher families as well. dont be 3rd rate. i hope ur logic isnt just garbage like other authors.

Although, he highly doubted his family would consent over such a union. After all, this was still the feudal age, and nobility did not marry commoners. Berengar set such matters aside for the time being. If he was to choose his own match, he would first need authority and physicality to back up his claims that he was now healthy. Both of which were a long way away from where he currently stood.

Tyranny of Steel

Tyranny of Steel

History · Zentmeister

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wouldnt you throw a party if your son won 100 million dollars on lottery

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The Rise of the Black Plain

The Rise of the Black Plain

Fantasy · RVN_1998

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aba jaa na be bhen ke lode, jaa jake gaand marwa, sale randi ki aulaad. tera baap bhadwa, teri maa randi, teri behen bhi randi. aur tu chutiya.

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The Bloodline System

The Bloodline System

Fantasy · TimVic

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behen ke lode, madarchod, randi ki aulad, chuth ke pakode, maa chuda chal nikal

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The Bloodline System

The Bloodline System

Fantasy · TimVic

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tum chutiya saale, tera baap chutiya Teri maa chutiya bhen ke lode.

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The Bloodline System

The Bloodline System

Fantasy · TimVic

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I am compelled to write this review because most of the reviews given for this novel are MISLEADING, MISINFORMING, and straight up LIE. The novel has no class, bad story development, bad character development, bad world development. I mean if you want to read, then sure but after 20-50 chapters you will come on your own and READ my review AGAIN. Lets talk about: 1)Writing Quality:- Quality of writing is not bad, apart from some grammatical mistakes, I don't see anything that can be considered 'mood-destroying'. 2)Story Development:- I know this is a cultivation/fantasy novel where MC is born OP. From the 1st chapter author starts describing characters that are heaven defying and renown across entire regions, but by the end of 10th chapter, all of those characters are shivering, wetting themselves and shivering when anything happens. The author doesnt have a proper scale for distinguishing between different levels of power, renown, strength etc. I know that author needs stronger villain to keep the story going but the novel feels like a summary version of a really bad cultivation novel. 3) Nomenclature:- The author is using some kind random name generator for naming everything. If he is naming sect, then he will generate 4 names, add all of them together and add sect at the end, eg: 'Saint Tiger Demon Beast Clan', this is a sect/clan in the novel. And this random name generator is used for naming of cities, regions, weapon class, cultivation class, and everything that exists in the novel apart from Names of humans. 3)Character design/development: Just sad. There is no development for other characters. If you are not a family of MC, you will not progress at all. Only MC & his family are allowed to progress. And I don't want to reveal anything but the MC has not aged one bit from 1st chapter till 150th chapter and he has gone from medium-strong in his own sect to strongest in entire continent. IN 1 YEAR. Author doesnt have any grasp of the TIME. 4) World design: Usually any good novel writer will work on the concept, character and the novel setting and much more before starting to write the novel, but our AUTHOR is winging it, I will give you an example: 1st to 10th chapter: MC stronger then 90% of his sect. now author needs a villain, bring top dog of his sect and make them fight. after winning MC stronger then everyone. so now author is in need of another stronger villain, lets make a new sect/empire, make an arrogant character of that empire who is more powerful then MC and have them bully the sect or target MC so MC will go and fight and while fighting will become as powerful as the character and win. Now author needs another sect/empire, AND SO THE CYCLE CONTINUES. The novel is written by a CHILD of age no more then 15. Or by a guy who couldn't mature past his adolescence. And it angers me that so many bots were used to give higher rating.

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The Bloodline System

The Bloodline System

Fantasy · TimVic

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Modi Modi Modi! Are ab ki baar Modi Sarkaar!!

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The Bloodline System

The Bloodline System

Fantasy · TimVic

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