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5mth
Commented See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 1294 Escape
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak
2yr
Replied to matamora Not to be crass but that definitely wasn't a distant approach...
While he was getting dressed, Night Tide Sands was also getting dressed, and as she did, she said, "If I get pregnant later, I'll call you."
Mages Are Too OP
Games · Soaring Flames
3yr
Commented love the story so far. I feel the descriptive words could be more..dynamic? the sentences seem a bit stilted to me. example: "he then turned" could be changed to simply "he turned" or throw in a description like "slowly, timidly, etc" instead
ch 74 Hesitation
Earth's Greatest Magus
Fantasy · Avan
nice
He spent more time with her than he had anticipated. By the time he had left her place, his hair and clothes were in a mess.
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak