LegolasGreenleaf

LegolasGreenleaf

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LegolasGreenleaf
LegolasGreenleaf
9 days ago
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His determination grew as he reviewed the lessons learned. Throwing dirt is a pretty handy move, available anytime and anywhere. But could it be improved? Maybe use lime or chili powder? Or even just throw a pack of Poison during a fight? If the initial attack doesn't kill him, the Poison surely will.

Transformation Diagram: Starting as a Skinny Dog

Transformation Diagram: Starting as a Skinny Dog

Eastern · Lu Luxiu

LegolasGreenleaf
LegolasGreenleaf
9 days ago
Commented

Pretty much Sirius Black but white.

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He was now on all fours, with dog paws and white fur. His body was half the height of his human form, but an indescribable mysterious power coursed through his blood.

Transformation Diagram: Starting as a Skinny Dog

Transformation Diagram: Starting as a Skinny Dog

Eastern · Lu Luxiu

LegolasGreenleaf
LegolasGreenleaf
10 days ago
Commented

Probably everyone will tell him not to be so modest at some point it feels like a trend in this novel.

Valen smiled slightly: "No need to be modest, talent is a Wizard's most precious asset, and you evidently have exceptionally rare potential."

Wizard: Unlimited Profession Slots

Wizard: Unlimited Profession Slots

Eastern · acane sauce

LegolasGreenleaf
LegolasGreenleaf
10 days ago
Commented

Feel like being a bloodline wizard would heal his burn scar if he still has it but it never mentions his appearance. I assume he still does since he was described as handsome without it in the beginning.

He wasn't particularly handsome. Yet, in Nina's eyes, he exuded a unique sense of power, distinctly different from other Wizards. It was as if merely being near him could calm the restlessness in her heart.

Wizard: Adventures in Two Worlds

Wizard: Adventures in Two Worlds

Eastern · Masked Stranger

LegolasGreenleaf
LegolasGreenleaf
10 days ago
Commented

You’ve just married*

"You're up for practice this early?" As she approached, Nina regarded him with a complex expression. "We've just married; you should spend more time with your wife. There's no need to push yourself so hard."

Wizard: Adventures in Two Worlds

Wizard: Adventures in Two Worlds

Eastern · Masked Stranger

LegolasGreenleaf
LegolasGreenleaf
11 days ago
Replied to Tibbles

I assume you are joking about the translation since it keeps making Gerry a guy.

Nina smiled graciously. She was known as the pearl of the Dream Market and had heard similar praises many times before, most laced with flattery. Or other motives. Very few knew that Nina possessed a special ability—a keen perception of changes in other people's thoughts. She was a natural-born lie detector. It was precisely for this reason that she had been entrusted by Harvey's mother to meet the so-called daughter-in-law. So she truly enjoyed Carl's compliments, because his compliments didn't contain any displeasing thoughts.

Wizard: Adventures in Two Worlds

Wizard: Adventures in Two Worlds

Eastern · Masked Stranger

LegolasGreenleaf
LegolasGreenleaf
11 days ago
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Pretty good wizard novel overall. The world is well done with the history and layout. Since it has two worlds both have a unique history to them. The mc is calm and hardworking though it has him make a few dumb things it is rare and doesn’t occur later on. He is more cautious which make sense with how dangerous everything is(plus he has less reason to do risky things thanks to resources from another world) but he still does get his hands dirty at times. Story is decent so far figuring out his special ability and more about the world is keeping the story going. His growth pace is steady overall but so far remains a lone wolf overall. Lone wolf in the sense as he becomes part of a community or organization but in the end it’s just relying on himself and having some random people run his shop so he can focus on cultivation. My biggest criticism is the lack of understanding how much time passes like I know he is going fast in cultivating but the time is not shown clearly often. Like his age gets brought up rarely(not even his age is mentioned later on, the best I got past the beginning was when he mentioned he would be over 30 in a few years).I need the age as a clear indication of time since translations do this where it says years later but it’s months several times. TLDR: Overall good story with minor flaws, the pace is steady and world is interesting. Mc is cautious, calm, focused on benefits and doesn’t shy away from killing but also doesn’t seek it out necessarily. Read 400 + chapters for reference.

LegolasGreenleaf
LegolasGreenleaf
14 days ago
Commented

This is just forced development. What they keep the potions underground where it’s most dangerous at the moment and also ask you to bring your companions along to get it. How much more obvious do they have to make it besides holding a sign up saying it’s a trap.

Carl didn't frown. Seeing the normal expressions of the others present, he hesitated for a moment before stepping forward to follow.

Wizard: Adventures in Two Worlds

Wizard: Adventures in Two Worlds

Eastern · Masked Stranger

LegolasGreenleaf
LegolasGreenleaf
14 days ago
Commented

Him: I’m moving but you can visit Her: It’s over we can never be together.

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"...Okay." Jenny clenched her hands, looking down, her voice heavy. "There's a troupe gathering later, so I won't go with you. Be careful on your way... please be careful."

Wizard: Adventures in Two Worlds

Wizard: Adventures in Two Worlds

Eastern · Masked Stranger

LegolasGreenleaf
LegolasGreenleaf
14 days ago
Commented

So this section shows the previous chapter 20 onwards where he named it the divine domain then the divine domain fragment was mistranslated. As he is acting like this is the first time he saw this name as if he wasn’t the one who named it this. Unsure how it should be translated as maybe he called it something random but not the first time I’ve seen this happen with translations.

What exactly is the Divine Domain? Is the Master of the Divine Domain a Divine? Or is there some relation to Divines?

Wizard: Adventures in Two Worlds

Wizard: Adventures in Two Worlds

Eastern · Masked Stranger