if it is bland story part write it in 3rd pov, while if it is some significant events or sentimental turning points use 1st pov as it is easier to show character interaction at a deeper level. This way it will become more interesting to read. But the decision is yours...
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Anime & Comics 路 Atom_Guy
coc is one of my favourite games, so i am looking forward to it. And i am kind of curious about what would you do with heroes like King, queen and all. Also i would really love if mc has his own castle, like town hall..
ch 0 1 About System
Anime & Comics 路 SexyNinjaBoi
author please increase the length of chapter. And thanks for the chapter
ch 27 Hypocritical bastard
Anime & Comics 路 guiws16
sure. enjoy the break
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Anime & Comics 路 Hancock_Sama
i am as engrossed in this book as kakashi to icha icha
ch 31 Notice [Not Chapter] ;
Anime & Comics 路 BlackStar_BH
i am hooked... !! Really an interesting start. Keep it up author san
ch 0 4 Invitation chat group members! Makino's tavern
Anime & Comics 路 BlackStar_BH
why not contracted beast?? having a living being inside oneself is not the best feeling i guess. And this way you can add some master-beastgirl spicy lemon as well... 馃檭馃檭馃榿
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Anime & Comics 路 SupremeCookie
That makes an occasion for massssss releasee...馃槣馃お
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Anime & Comics 路 DemonoidKing
douluo dalu for waifus and face slapping tang san or harry potter, i know its very unusual but the magic there is really convenient for daily life as well as for getting phoenix or basilisk. well atg, todag, danmachi, naruto, overlord, bleach are evergreen choices.
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Anime & Comics 路 Your_host_HK
imperio to nott and obliviate to others and be done with it...
ch 76 CH 72: Good Lady
Book&Literature 路 Lazy_Ryuu
firstly i hope your mother get well soon.. and you are writing a great story there. i really hope you increase the conversations. I do have a doubt though, the MC had the quest to break the marriage between the XQ and XC and by this point of story its totally confirmed that they won't be marrying. So i guess the quest should be considered completed No??
ch 43 Counting corpses and New Moons
Book&Literature 路 Fellbane
for nicknme tyrant dragon- due to the tyranny he displayed. or dragon of death- due to high casualties caused by him.
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Anime & Comics 路 Your_host_HK
add nami and give her the lightening fruit... she already posses incredible weather reading ability, with the fruit her senses would be enhanced to extreme and op to boost. also add nojiko as a very caring and loving big sis figure for luffy. ps: a devoted yandere hancock is a must 馃槝
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Anime & Comics 路 Your_host_HK
Dude this is great so far, but don't miss our cat burglar... She has her unique flavour. Also i would love if you add some POVs of the 5 goddesses. And add some mischief from them, i think it would be more entertaining.
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Anime & Comics 路 Your_host_HK
can MC stop being a nanny... It's too distasteful now.
ch 41 The Hunt: Fuck Centipedes
Book&Literature 路 Fellbane
I wish MC to use his dragon spirit..馃ぃ馃ぃ
ch 109 Bad Situation?!
Anime & Comics 路 Nine_Clouds
loving your style of writing author
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Anime & Comics 路 SupremeCookie
having high expectations... fingers crossed
ch 0 2 Ground Work
Marvel: I... am Iron Man?
Movies 路 BeaulenSmith