I love the story, I think I love Sam more. I would like to see the mate he would marry. What i don't like about the story is lillian ability not to fight back. Weak females are not my thing, I do hope to see her become a strong female lead. The story is well written, a bit rushed for my taste but still good
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Your writing style makes it seem more like a screen play than an actual novel. If that is what you are going for
ch 0 2 Chapter two:THE TRUST GAME
Urban · binni_seon
I will be honest, your work is good but there are some part that needs a bit of work. I am saying this because as a writer I would also like if someone tell me where I need to improve on, me I am a writer who has grammar issues, if you take a look at it you would know that I have some issues I need to work on and I am doing that
ch 0 3 Bestie Warnings (impending danger)
Urban · shy_baby222
you did not have to republish it some where else...what of the readers you have gathered. just go to where you write your book..the setting .they will ask if you are signing up for a competition
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - Shi Fin
Fantasy · ZeroX0666
well I think your book is good enough to enter in the contest...it basically the place in which you write your synopsis and all
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - Shi Fin
Fantasy · ZeroX0666
why don't you enter your book in the competition the WSA
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - Shi Fin
Fantasy · ZeroX0666
Your description of the fighting scene so 🔥
ch 0 9 Chapter 9 - Changes
Fantasy · ZeroX0666
I love the main character easy going life. It something I wish I had right now. Even if he complains alot about being stressed out, I think waking up to a rich family is the best thing that can happen to him. But I think if you could make your writing more elaborate and clear it will be easier to read
The Rulers World
Fantasy · NicholasZZ