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  • Fallen Guardian : The last Shadow

    Fallen Guardian : The last Shadow

    Fantasy

    4.7

    "I will make sure that they can't follow you. Run as fast and far as you can, don't look back and brace for impact when you hear it.. " "You see...the problem is, I don't go back on my words." He said in a high pitched tone, only god knows who he was speaking to. He lifted his sword and started striking the space in front of him fiercely, every strike left a glowing scar in the space around him. One could say that he was dancing with his sword. But it was a dance that courted death. "Now go back to sleep ARNUS EDIOS..!!!" The scars in the space around him reformed into a dark energy circle. It was an energy circle that no would dare to summon. He knew he would almost certainly die, but he had to do what had to be done, fulfil his vows. "Take my Sword and if it isn't enough take my life..." He said without an inch of concern for his life. He mustered all his energy one last time, every nook of his energy. He recalled everything that happened in his life. "Shadow Blood Seal...!!!" He released all his energy into the seal in one instance. The seal sucked in all the energy in an instant and there lasted a moment of peace in the air. The seal released enormous amount of dark energy that covered a great radius around it, even a Rank-S Protector would tremble in such a sight. It sucked in everything living which used darkness to live around it, sealing one of the seven demon kings, Second DEMON KING - ARNUS EDIOS and his army back in the underworld. A great crowd braced for impact as The Shadow, One of the Seven Guardians has instructed them to, every single person knelt in his honour, assuming that he was no more...But was he really no more..

  • We Summon You : One Last Time

    We Summon You : One Last Time

    Fantasy

    "Hey...hey! Get up!" A teen called out to a boy sleeping peacefully on the bed. The boy moaned in answer, "Let me sleep in for 5 more minutes please." Thud He was kicked out of the bed and he looked up in anger, "What the-" "Look above." A nerd like guy told the boy, who looked above and was immediately stunned. "......" The boy went silent with shock, along with the six others who were in front of him. What was this place!?!? ------------------------------ Seven teenagers were dragged out of their normal lives and pulled into a whole new world. All it took was one bright flash, and the next moment, everything had disappeared. With no one to help or guide them, and countless questions flooding their mind, how will they survive in this doomed world? Leo, Sai, Ian, Clint, Reeva, Aiko and Erina are striving to live in this twisted world, only hoping that they'll be able to go back home one day. ----------------------- "Hey, what's your name?" Reeva shouted out to the blue-haired girl who was still fiddling with the little mushroom. "Oh, me? I am Erina!" She answered sweetly and plucked the mushroom in front of her. MUNCH! And there she was, inside a canine toothed man eating plant's mouth, covered in drool. "....."

Moments

Deep_Diver: Zhixin: Don't burden her.
Su Yu: *Plays 'The Heart what it wants' song in the car.'*

My Youth Began With Him · C1640
6 months ago
Zhixin: Don't burden her.
Su Yu: *Plays 'The Heart what it wants' song in the car.'* View More
My Youth Began With Him · C1640
6 months ago

eton: i see this story different from the usual stories i already read here at webnovel.. i hope the author continues the story with more exciting plots..

We Summon You : One Last Time
7 months ago

Deep_Diver: Black bear VS Wolf
Fight!

My Youth Began With Him · C1527
7 months ago
Black bear VS Wolf
Fight! View More
My Youth Began With Him · C1527
7 months ago

Deep_Diver: June 11 : I can't read it anymore
Today : eff it lets read
Reactions :
First : That hurts
Second : Oh su yu!
Third : Creeper
Fourth : She didn't deserve such death
Five : Creeper HSQ
Mind : I told u, I effin told u not to read

My Youth Began With Him · C1523
7 months ago
June 11 : I can't read it anymore
Today : eff it lets read
Reactions :
First : That hurts
Second : Oh su yu!
Third : Creeper
Fourth : She didn't deserve such death
Five : Creeper HSQ
Mind : I told u, I effin told u not to read View More
My Youth Began With Him · C1523
7 months ago
I changed the synopsis. View More

Isaidiot_Blue: The content has been deleted

We Summon You : One Last Time
7 months ago
Welp, you got to wait to know why. View More

CrispyNoodle: This makes me curious... Why only him? What about the other 6 o.o

We Summon You : One Last Time · C31
7 months ago
Yup, your confusion is pretty visible, LOL.
Have a nice day. View More

peter3135566: Abonermely large abnolemativeness in this group
Ended up confusing even myself attemting to type that xD

We Summon You : One Last Time · C27
7 months ago

BlueDragonHatch: You have a Nice day too.


And yes, as an aethist i think its safe to say im against the posibility of a god.. :P

We Summon You : One Last Time · C10
7 months ago
You, my friend, are surely against the possibility of the existence of god.

I am not going to argue and I do accept what you are saying.

You do debate a lot with yourself relating these matters, don't you?

Nice debating with ya. Have a nice day. View More

BlueDragonHatch: While qi has yet to be explained by Science it doesn't mean it can't be explained. As an example we have yet to properly explain gravity, we know How it effects matter but se don't know why or exactly How it works. I believe the people in this worlds understanding of qi is similar. They now How to use qi and How qi effects things, but they dont know why qi exist or why it works the way it does.

Yes, the knowledge of qi would stir the scientific comminity, but if it was proven it would likely be the foundation of multiple scientific breakthroughs.

An ancient text on its own isn't proof of god/gods existing, most holy tekst in the real world would also be considered ancient but that does not mean what they say is true.

If gods truly did exist i would probely still not believe in them (as in i would know they exist but not pray or believe i a religious way) though i might pray if something terible happens, ie person i care for slowly dieing before my eyes.
Of course i wont deny the posibility that i would end up talking a liking to one of the gods or what they represent and becoming religious at that point.

Besides the world seems to be based on asian culture, in witch People can assend to godhood, and gods are more humanised, which would probaly convince me that they are just human(or other things) Who have reached immortality through the use of qi. So god would be more of a title for their power. If this is true i would most likely treat them as I would any other person. In the end they are just very old and powerfull People.

We Summon You : One Last Time · C10
7 months ago
Cause the concept of Qi proves that there is an energy which cannot be explained by science. And the concept of Qi was taught by the gods, according to the ancient scripts.

~Sincerely, your author.

(LOL, I loved this convo by the way) View More

BlueDragonHatch: Why would an aethist have Any problem with that? Aethists just dont believe in a god, they can still have religion and qi does not mean god exists.
Even if god exists who cares? Why should i have Faith in him just because he exists?
Sincerely, an aethist

We Summon You : One Last Time · C10
7 months ago
I know what you mean but that's gonna change after a certain future plot. (He is suppressing his otaku thoughts but not for long.) View More

Webbwolf: i feel disappointed in lan and Sai that they don't know what's going on

We Summon You : One Last Time · C13
7 months ago
I am personally not a fan of 7 MCs as well, but the difference I am trying to bring between other novels and mine is that even though we have seven MCs, reading the novel isn't going to bring you an impression of seven different highlighted characters but only as if the traits of a perfect MC was split seven ways into seven people. But the story would progress primarily from Leo's direction as he is the brain of the team.

I hope you continue to read the novel. View More

SamStrike: Are all the 7 people MCs or is there only one? I am not a fan at all of multiple MCs

We Summon You : One Last Time
7 months ago

PayDay: No problem it's really early in the novel so I understand that things aren't as fleshed out yet. I hope you understand about only giving a 3 star for the updates though. As the novel is still in its infancy with the amount of chapters I usually give a 3 star until the chapters reach around 60+. Usually around then either the author is keeping with the story updates, about to go on "hiatus" or starting to lag behind in updates due to actually writing the story. Until then I cant really get a feel for the updates so I feel comfortable giving a 3 star.

We Summon You : One Last Time
7 months ago
First of all, I get what you are saying. I agree that I didn't explain much about the first city, but that's because I needed it to be kept in the dark for a future plot. Still, I do agree with you that I shouldn't have skimmed it that much. I will try not to repeat the mistake.

Secondly, I am very serious about keeping the updates stable. Even if I miss an update, I will make sure that I post an extra chap the very next day (I am presently on a trip to Singapore, but I am still trying my best to write the chaps in the night. I hope this will clarify any doubts regarding my update stability.)

Thirdly, the character design difference between the seven will become transparent as soon as the academic year starts and that is the main reason why I rushed the story to the academy. I wanted to present the difference between the character designs of each MC as soon as possible, which required me to quickly shift the story from the first city to the academy.

Finally, I 'really' (*emphasis on really*) appreciate you for giving me a detailed review.

THANK YOU A LOT. View More

PayDay: TL;DR
First city should have been way longer than it actually was. Some parts feel slightly glossed over when should have been fleshed out. Character "importance" between the SEVEN seem very blatant at least at where I am. Stability is fine, but world building feels lacking. Grammar has hiccups but is fine compared to some novels. The novel is worth a try but needs some umph.

Review
It feels a little wrong to give this story a review this early into its start but I felt it needed one. As this story has just started out I can say that the writing quality is adequate, not perfect, but good enough that I'm not banging my head because of extreme mistakes.

I gave updates a 3 as it just started so there's no telling how long the author will stick to the schedule but so far they have kept it well.

Development is good. This novel is not rushing itself which I like. The pacing is not bad although some parts feel skimmed over. I would have liked to see more of the first city along with some interactions with the residence. It felt slightly rushed with how fast they dipped out of that area to head to the academy.

Character design... honestly I am not particularly happy with it. With the author having seven important characters it's important to make sure we see that they're all important. Right now though I can say that only Leo, Clint, and Erina are memorable at all. The only reason I even remember Sai is because I rather like the name and he gets dialogue. The other characters (especially the other girls) feel like side characters to Leo. I understand he is supposed to be the leader and the novel has just started but it's hard to see the other characters when all but a few even have an opinion. If I could change one thing I would have had asked if you could give more time in the city to really get to know the characters as they interact with the world around them rather than react.

The dialogue.... is really telling about who the author seems to care about right now. In some areas it feels like the characters have a voice of their own (good) in others it feels like generic person A voice.

World background uhh as I said before the first city should have been where they interacted and figured out about the world. Nothing about the simple explanation made the world stand out much at all. As I haven't gotten to the Academy part of the story I hope that the world gets fleshed out more.

Thanks for the novel. I am being critical but the fact is your novel is definitely not bad and deserves more exposure.

We Summon You : One Last Time
7 months ago

Deep_Diver: Hey there! This is my second novel with fantasy and magic as the main theme.

Tell me, what would you do if you were suddenly teleported to another world along with a few other, for some reason and you didn't know why you were summoned. Well, if you want to know what happens to seven random teens who meet that situation then you might like my novel. So, please give it a shot.

And I know what you are thinking :

Reader: Did this author just write himself a review? LMAO!

Author: Yeah, but I got to support myself and that's the reason behind the rating. Hope you guys like the novel and if you do please leave a comment or a review.

We Summon You : One Last Time
7 months ago

PayDay: TL;DR
First city should have been way longer than it actually was. Some parts feel slightly glossed over when should have been fleshed out. Character "importance" between the SEVEN seem very blatant at least at where I am. Stability is fine, but world building feels lacking. Grammar has hiccups but is fine compared to some novels. The novel is worth a try but needs some umph.

Review
It feels a little wrong to give this story a review this early into its start but I felt it needed one. As this story has just started out I can say that the writing quality is adequate, not perfect, but good enough that I'm not banging my head because of extreme mistakes.

I gave updates a 3 as it just started so there's no telling how long the author will stick to the schedule but so far they have kept it well.

Development is good. This novel is not rushing itself which I like. The pacing is not bad although some parts feel skimmed over. I would have liked to see more of the first city along with some interactions with the residence. It felt slightly rushed with how fast they dipped out of that area to head to the academy.

Character design... honestly I am not particularly happy with it. With the author having seven important characters it's important to make sure we see that they're all important. Right now though I can say that only Leo, Clint, and Erina are memorable at all. The only reason I even remember Sai is because I rather like the name and he gets dialogue. The other characters (especially the other girls) feel like side characters to Leo. I understand he is supposed to be the leader and the novel has just started but it's hard to see the other characters when all but a few even have an opinion. If I could change one thing I would have had asked if you could give more time in the city to really get to know the characters as they interact with the world around them rather than react.

The dialogue.... is really telling about who the author seems to care about right now. In some areas it feels like the characters have a voice of their own (good) in others it feels like generic person A voice.

World background uhh as I said before the first city should have been where they interacted and figured out about the world. Nothing about the simple explanation made the world stand out much at all. As I haven't gotten to the Academy part of the story I hope that the world gets fleshed out more.

Thanks for the novel. I am being critical but the fact is your novel is definitely not bad and deserves more exposure.

We Summon You : One Last Time
7 months ago
Reading Status: C17
Hey there! This is my second novel with fantasy and magic as the main theme.

Tell me, what would you do if you were suddenly teleported to another world along with a few other, for some reason and you didn't know why you were summoned. Well, if you want to know what happens to seven random teens who meet that situation then you might like my novel. So, please give it a shot.

And I know what you are thinking :

Reader: Did this author just write himself a review? LMAO!

Author: Yeah, but I got to support myself and that's the reason behind the rating. Hope you guys like the novel and if you do please leave a comment or a review. View More
We Summon You : One Last Time
8 months ago
That's not what I meant...LOL View More

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We Summon You : One Last Time · C3
8 months ago

Anjyy: I m just annoyed by the name song yishi. Why s she here. God pls don't make her take advantage of the situation like cursing Mian coz of QC state

My Youth Began With Him · C984
11 months ago

Anjyy: Bitch yishi is there just to divert readers mind from agony to annoyance.

My Youth Began With Him · C984
11 months ago
Mass release...I can’t exactly mass release.
But in return for your support I will give u an additional 2-3 chaps on sun. View More
Fallen Guardian : The last Shadow · C36
12 months ago
Are we supposed to feel bad or good. View More
My Youth Began With Him · C777
12 months ago
True View More

Bald_Chanyeol_: Exactly. Doesn't add up...

My Youth Began With Him · C778
12 months ago

NightOwl95: Bcoz the Rules are strict maybe. 'No Using Energy more than 200MW' is the rule probably.

Fallen Guardian : The last Shadow · C16
1 year ago

SunnyB: Here's the way I see it, imagine if in real life there was a dangerous hostage situation, and an unknown man shot the criminal. Even if the man helped out, the police can't just have people with guns running about willy nilly shooting others without regulation. Now imagine the same thing but instead of a gun, the man has a rocket launcher. See the problem?

Fallen Guardian : The last Shadow · C16
1 year ago
The actual plot is going to be revealed in the 31st or the 32nd chapter...yes, it is a bit stretched out and sorta late but that's just the way the story is. I am going to follow your pointer and stop using many ellipses as well as use only '...' for a pause and I will see what I can do with grammar. All in all, thank you for the pointers. View More

SunnyB: The story is good in general. The characters are intriguing, the plot is interesting, and the world building is pretty good. Despite this, there are a few flaws. Firstly, there doesn't seem to be much progression in the story. What are the main character's goals? What is he striving for? If there is no story development, there might as well be no story. The grammar also needs some work, I would recommend grammarly. As it is right now, it's readable but not great. I would also caution against using to many ellipses. One or two a chapter is okay, but 23 per chapter is not, especially with relatively short chapters. They are used to add dramatic effect, but if you overuse them then they lose that effect. An apt comparison would be like how capitalized letters are used for emphasis, but if I capitalize ToO much, then it loSes its meaning. At this POINT, rather tHAn adding draMATIC effect, it's just Being annOying. Things lIKe this SHOUld be used spArinGly. On an aVERage book, you Would see AT most one or two eLlipSEs per page, and UsuAlly one every FEw paGes. Don't just throw them wherever you want the way I'm doing it with capitals. By doing that, you ruin the effect of adding dramatic emphasis by using it too much. Also, when you do use it it should always be with three dots, like so ... Any more doesn't mean a longer pause, it means that it's wrong. It may not be a huge deal, but it's the equivalent of doing this when someone speaks: ""Hello.' Not completely wrong, still recognizable, but just annoying, like an itch you can't scratch. This is why you don't usually see stories with bad grammar really high on the power rankings. Bad grammar is like a small itch, sure you can ignore it if the story is good, but between two equally good stories, one with good grammar and the other with bad grammar, why make yourself suffer?

Fallen Guardian : The last Shadow
1 year ago

Reitachi: Well.. Kinda boring with the typical writing out there gonna try something new .. Maybe this is my answer.. From the hipotesis its looking good with prolog like that and maybe we'll meet some surprise in this novel..

Fallen Guardian : The last Shadow
1 year ago
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