zer0nova

2mth

Replied to Dotencsure

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The Great Genetic Era

Eastern · Pig Sanbu

zer0nova

3mth

Replied to maelvoid_2025

If you wanted to see that, read Mass Effect SI : Ultimate Krogan, that one is a wild story 🤣🤣

"What choice do I have? I want to live, even if that means I stop being human. So I agree to be your vessel."

God Of The Omniverse

Movies · God_Of_Brutality

zer0nova

5mth

Posted

This is my first review, i hope this help the author to develop his/her skill on writing Vol 1 is 8/10 : Nice to see a novel that’s talk about the ancient naruto era Vol 2 is 1/10 : A dissapointing try from Author to incorporate others world (AGM) to author world, making it lost its originality a ton Detailing review for Vol 2 [BEWARE SPOILER] : 1. Full of copying from other novel, that is AGM for the world building, you didn’t make any changes to the name of the Sect or even region, make it a dissapointing copycat (also idk if you copy some chapter from AGM because we could see Qin Wentian name, the MC of AGM, on some of your chapter) - You could atleast change the name of the sect, see more abilities from another novel, making it more “unique” than a copycat of AGM - it’s much better if this arc is about Shun traveling to AGM universe, because it’s make us to get ready to dive into xianxia world, because right now, this Naruto Universe already lost its uniqueness, that is Chakra, Otsusiki, and Shinjutsu 2. You didn’t adapt any of the good element that make a xianxia novel (the full in depth of good power system, a nice comprehension, a creative use of ability), only the bad cliche (young master, enemy at every door, a spechless spectator of the battle, etc) - Recommended to read Journey of Fate Destroying Emperor or even Harry Potter Dimensional Wizard to see how a good world building of the xianxia and fanfiction without bad cliche 3. A waste of arc, where reading this arc we couldn’t see how much MC truly improves 4. Personal opinion : the battle also a bit boring, where it’s just energy palm / sword swinging at each other, no creative use of the domain. - You should incorporate more use of techniques, like in this final battle, its more exciting - You should also describe the damage of the battle on the surrounding, how big is the crater or the impact of the skill, etc

Naruto: Back in Ancient Times

Anime & Comics · Josh_Richie

zer0nova

5mth

Commented

Vol 2 is 1/10 : This is my first review, i hope this help the author to develop his/her skill on writing 1. Full of copying from other novel, that is AGM for the world building, you didn’t make any changes to the name of the Sect or even region, make it a dissapointing copycat (also idk if you copy some chapter from AGM because we could see Qin Wentian name, the MC of AGM, on some of your chapter) - You could atleast change the name of the sect, see more abilities from another novel, making it more “unique” than a copycat of AGM - it’s much better if this arc is about Shun traveling to AGM universe, because it’s make us to get ready to dive into xianxia world, because right now, this Naruto Universe already lost its uniqueness, that is Chakra, Otsusiki, and Shinjutsu 2. You didn’t adapt any of the good element that make a xianxia novel (the full in depth of good power system, a nice comprehension, a creative use of ability), only the bad cliche (young master, enemy at every door, a spechless spectator of the battle, etc) - Recommended to read Journey of Fate Destroying Emperor or even Harry Potter Dimensional Wizard to see how a good world building of the xianxia and fanfiction without bad cliche 3. A waste of arc, where reading this arc we couldn’t see how much MC truly improves 4. Personal opinion : the battle also a bit boring, where it’s just energy palm / sword swinging at each other, no creative use of the domain. - You should incorporate more use of techniques, like in this final battle, its more exciting - You should also describe the damage of the battle on the surrounding, how big is the crater or the impact of the skill, etc

ch 225 Chapter 100

Naruto: Back in Ancient Times

Anime & Comics · Josh_Richie

zer0nova

1yr

Replied to LazySageDao

Ah, so you read it too 👍, but maybe you could try to read it sometimes, one thing i like about your novels is because of the creativity, interisting progression, and the massive scale of the universe in your books, and all of that you could find it in that novel too, btw love your novels and good luck bro 😄

"You want to peacefully negotiate a cultural exchange with the Planar Will?" asked Rowena.

Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

Book&Literature · LazySageDao

zer0nova

1yr

Commented

Now we have oddete, where is lancelot?

"And it's also to practice my magic!" Odelette smiled and said, "Oh right! I figured out how to do the barrier like you said, Jihu!"

The Second Coming of Gluttony, the First of Vainglory

Anime & Comics · HappyVainGlory

zer0nova

1yr

Commented

👏 The idea of negotiating with the planar will remind me of novel soul of searing steel, if somebody haven’t read it, I recommend you to read it 100% 👍

ch 400 Universe Era

Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

Book&Literature · LazySageDao

zer0nova

1yr

Commented

Nice 👏 this remind me of soul of searing steel, author did you ever read soul of searing steel? If not i recommend it 100% 👍

"You want to peacefully negotiate a cultural exchange with the Planar Will?" asked Rowena.

Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

Book&Literature · LazySageDao

zer0nova

1yr

Commented

This is the rise of the sword immortal 😎

Chris controlled the vector of the sword to change direction, achieving a power similar to telekinesis. Like a child, he continued to control the sword, making it fly upward, downward, side to side, etc. He had a smile plastered on his face like a child who received a new toy for Christmas.

Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

Book&Literature · LazySageDao

zer0nova

1yr

Commented

$ nano hello.c #include <stdio.h> #include <stdlib.h> int main(void){ char input[4]; printf(“Hello World!\n”); printf(“Do you want to continue reading?\n”); printf(”Yes / No >>”); scanf(“%3s”, &input); if(input == “Yes”){ printf(“Let’s Go!”); } else if(input == “No”){ printf(”Goodbye!”); } else{ printf(”This is taking to long, let’s just end it with this lol”; } return 0; } $ gcc hello.c -o hello $ ./hello.c

Hello World!

The Extra's Dominance

Fantasy · Drei05

zer0nova

1yr

Commented

I want to see that, the face slapping is gonna be glorious 😎

I was going to try and fit in a scene of the professor's being mindbroken by Rudy's nonsense with magic, but it looks like that might have to wait a bit. Maybe he'll pull out a memory sphere or something when the students complain that he's wrong...