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Banana_Bomb: TL;DR in my eyes, its carefully planned, so far that is, and a reasonable filler here and there. Glad you, dear author, keeps longevity in mind and a proper plot progression plan. Those who have not noticed, Doulo Dalu arc has a few time skip, so keep your "dragging" rant in your own pocket dimension.

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eh, seems okay, not feeling dragged at all, like some DBZ episode, or some Detective Conan that become a running joke at a certain point.

If I ever guess it right, the first arch was to gain experience and mostly plot forwarding, also setting in the foundation, hence the barren wasteland situation in narutoverse

bleach is more like him playing, or acting and probably trying to gain experience as a commander.

in this one, he is building a forward base, all things considered, the author has military background, the inner working of a forward base must be familiar.

also, you can go, I have power that makes me right because MIGHT bull**** route, go to a world smash everything in a few chapter and be done with it, rinse and repeat for other world, and that will last you for how many chapter?
eventually the story becomes bland, as a writer you will limit yourself, essentially cutting your own plot in half.

it was already clear how he conquers and how he builds up his kingdom/empire since naruto, not as a tyrant.

also if you go MIGHT IS RIGHT yada yada yada, why not just write a CN novel and publish it in printed books.

sometimes people just wont let their mind enjoy the story and be bothered by the many harem/tyrant MC.

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C139
5 hours ago

Ather47: Kneel & Shiver Almighty Emperor Is Here

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C134
5 hours ago

DaoistDark13: I agree

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C134
5 hours ago

Pirate_Hunter: Bibi Dong has a dark past raped by son of supreme pontiff the one that tang hao injured severly but in reality bibi dong is the one who killed him he only love grandmaster tang san master before he became one of the 3 golden trio

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C134
5 hours ago

Scientistx: Finally utterly crashed that b i t c h's arrogance!!!

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C134
5 hours ago

CyanReader: What are you talking about SHE killed her husband! He came back from the battle in a deplorable condition and she killed him it wasn't Tang Hao!

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C134
5 hours ago

Gerard: Very sad, she was very kind before then was raped and forced to accept her fate... truly sad, I was expecting that the mc would change her current life.

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C134
5 hours ago

Naveed786: Thanks for the chapter. Hope we soon see naruto with fox animal spirit, sauske and hinata with spirit eyes essence, kiba and kakashi with dog or wolf spirit, SAKURA with gorilla spirit lol Ok, ichigo with star sword spirit, ino team with brain or mental spirit. What u say auther?😁😁😁

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C130
7 hours ago

Illusory_Reality: Absorb himself a demon devourer tree of the highest level and gain the top tier defense skill (invulnerability)

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7 hours ago

Illusory_Reality: We still didn't see mc's status for a long time

I suggest showing his status at the begining and the end of each plane conquer at least.

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C123
15 hours ago

Naveed786: The most best thing in your novel is minimal blood spilling and solving the matters intelligently. You are best and smart person Mr novelist. Keep it up bro.

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C122
16 hours ago

AlmightyAsterisk: Before he does i sure tatsuo will have castrated the little sh*t

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C121
16 hours ago

Kul: My God, this author makes me wonder if he is even human so many chapters!

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C121
16 hours ago

Shuragen: in plane 0 meet and fight ultra instinct shaggy (scoby-doo) to be the overgod xD

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16 hours ago

Epaxx: You know if your a 100 000 year old spirit beast and evolve to being human and start anew. You don't need to kill a spirit beast, they can generate their own rings like Xiao Wu from original fic.

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C117
16 hours ago

LordAlmighty: Tang San was Half Spirit Beast. Spirit Beast are able to Cultivate Quicker and have more powerful bodies. Plus Tang San in Actuality had this glorious birth which allowed him to grow faster. Tatsuo has none of that so I took the easiest route that makes the most sense while also building the world, making it larger than the 1 continent in the story while also giving it a small background story. Just saying that you shouldn’t dismiss something without knowing everything.

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C117
16 hours ago

Daoisttian_03: I was hoping he be born as a human but one of his powers could have became his spirit and that could have been his clans spirit like the tang clan and their hammers

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C115
16 hours ago

Asahi21: If i remember correctly isn't that the theme of Douluo 3 i believe where the MC is a pro forging and had a golden dragon spirit somehow inside of him that help him improve his physical power while the FL had a silver/multicolored (don' remember) which help her master the elements (fire, air, water, etc....)

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C115
16 hours ago

glo_antttt: wtf is he a spirit beast ????? to become tang sans ring?

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C115
16 hours ago

HeavensMonarch: An ice dragon? Why not make the dragon golden or even silver?

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C115
16 hours ago

LordAlmighty: Itachi will be there eventually.

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C115
16 hours ago

Kul: Love this book can't wait for the next chapter Love Nel so glad this isn't a harem book Nel is the perfect Female Lead

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C115
16 hours ago

SilverPheonix210: ⚜️Thanks for the chapter⚜️

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C114
16 hours ago

vdb: Last dialogue was amazing.. 😳

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C114
16 hours ago

Dragonfang99: Omg shisui makes an appearance like a boss
Thanks for the chapter

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C114
16 hours ago

Illusory_Reality: Please make tatsou kill yhwach at the peak of his power after he abdorbed soul king and his right hand man only to have his abilities copied by his zanpakutos and make him the catalyst to fuse his zanpakuto.

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C114
16 hours ago

XxNINAxX: I have a question :

A. Since when shisui arrived in bleach world?
B. Have three of them meet each other?
C. Since when he Espada cero?

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C114
16 hours ago

Morning_Fragrance: >Waits for WMW
>Wondering what the author is going to do for the obviously non distinct ruler of the plane
>Rank 9 has been confirmed not the limit
>The universe has been basically proven to be endless
>Rank 10/11 are the only confirmed ranks after 9 but we know Leylin is still progressing past 11. PogChamp

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C112
16 hours ago

DarkWalker_1987: MR AUTHOR WHAT IS THE NAME OF MAIN CHARACTER'S BABY? I HOPE THE MC GOING MAKE HIS HUGE PLANE AND MIGRATE HIS EMPIRE OR CLAN :p THE HUGE PLAN CAN USE DIFFERENT CULTIVATE BESIDE chakra.

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C111
17 hours ago

the_lost_lotus: Is he finally going to have a kid

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17 hours ago
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