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feyfell
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That's a lot of variations of "check" in two sentences. Please don't take offense as I am enjoying the story very much, but I've noticed a lot of repetition. Mainly over emphasizing details which could have done with less.
"I'm just patrolling around. Although this place has been checked, it still needs another checking. The other teachers also started checking this place to make sure that it's safe," Shirotsuka Sanae explained.
The Magician of Sound
Sci-fi · Fixten
couldn't *
At this point, Han Sen was facing the wolf alone, but the wolf even hit him, which made the wolf snap harder.
Super Gene
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
nope.
At the back of the stands, too young man in sunglasses were whispering to each other.
Super Gene
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
ch 135 Not a Wonderful Match
Super Gene
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
the second "calmly" is redundant.
Sure enough, Qin calmly dodged all the strikes Han Sen made calmly as if she were dancing. Meanwhile she fought back from time to time with grace.
Super Gene
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
if he gained 2 levels the first time it exploded, he should be level 5 now not 4
ch 601 Conclusion and Spatial Compass
Super Gene Optimization Fluid
Sci-fi · 9 lightyears per second