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I thought as much. Dont worry about it too much, mistakes happen. Especially if you write several stories like you do.
Thanks to Venom, injuries and fatigue were things of the past, I was always alert and ready, and if by some miracle a gun managed to hurt me, I would heal too fast for anyone even to notice I was wounded in the first place, with my trusty rifle the Springfield 1903 .30–06, it was easy to kill people, one bullet, one Nazi down, all of this made my kill count on this war exponentially higher than any other soldier. This was, of course, all thanks to Venom, he gave me a terrifyingly accurate aim, helping me to never miss a shot, which was by human standards impossible, but it made my life easier.
Twilight: We Are Venom!
Book&Literature · CORNBRINGER
Isnt this World War 1? if so then you got a fact wrong, they didnt have Nazis un WW1 and either you got that mixed up or your MC is racist/Discrimintes and thinks all Germans=Nazis? Hoping it is just a Mixup Honestly.
Thanks to Venom, injuries and fatigue were things of the past, I was always alert and ready, and if by some miracle a gun managed to hurt me, I would heal too fast for anyone even to notice I was wounded in the first place, with my trusty rifle the Springfield 1903 .30–06, it was easy to kill people, one bullet, one Nazi down, all of this made my kill count on this war exponentially higher than any other soldier. This was, of course, all thanks to Venom, he gave me a terrifyingly accurate aim, helping me to never miss a shot, which was by human standards impossible, but it made my life easier.
Twilight: We Are Venom!
Book&Literature · CORNBRINGER
+1 to (Fem)Haku Not only do I think Temari fits Shikamaru too well to ruin that, but also Temari is mainly a Wind style user as far as Ive seen and seeing as that MC wants to use the Hidden Mist Jutsu to take advantage of his eyes, I dont think that would fit very well. But the MC and Haku would become a Deadly Duo if they ever fought together since Haku was Basically trained by an expert in the Hidden Mist Jutsu and Silent Assassination^^
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Shadow Reaper of the Hidden Sand
Anime & Comics · Azrael_Draco
this is stolen thou? like this story has been around since 2015 and was written IN ENGLISH by someone called TurtleMe, what you're doing is taking the translation of an english original and translating it back into english, I dont know if you were aware of that or not but this is straight up stealing/copying or whatever.