axelcreepsnake
Lv 3- Joined Jan 2019
- Venezuela, Bolivarian Republic of
- Male
probre pero vivo.
Moments
SpookyDookie: Honestly i keep imagining them instead of sea turtles but instead a tortoise or a snapping turtle of sorts because they act similarly to them
The Journey of the Little Orphan Tortoise · C8
axelcreepsnake: It was fine but I can not stop thinking that it would have been better if the story would be developed in a swamp and instead of a sea turtle a snapping turtle but good
The Journey of the Little Orphan Tortoise · C8
The Journey of the Little Orphan Tortoise · C8
The Journey of the Little Orphan Tortoise · C6
The Journey of the Little Orphan Tortoise · C5
The Journey of the Little Orphan Tortoise · C2
SirHerrington: Due to the lack of chapter during this time ( 1 / 2 / 2019 ) I will have to make a current statement of the novel. The story development and description is efficient in producing a well-played scenarios which portrays the emotions of the characters explicitly and inexplicitly. The character design is easy to imagine or predict based on previous events, however the background for each scene may seem like a green-screen at times. Each scenario in this story combines the past events to the relevancy of the recent events, which causes the flow of the story to continue. Although due to the lack of chapters I believe this story has potential and gave it a 4.6 based on the current standings.
The Journey of the Little Orphan Tortoise
WoW_ok: A good beginning, definitely worth reading just to see where this goes. And I need to add more characters to this review to post it but I don't really know what to say about it as it's still pretty early into the story.
The Journey of the Little Orphan Tortoise
MegamanXcross7: So I have recently started to read this novel you've been working on and I have to say that this is really good so far, keep up the good work and please update soon.
The Journey of the Little Orphan Tortoise
The Journey of the Little Orphan Tortoise
The Journey of the Little Orphan Tortoise · C1
White Snake · C35
axelcreepsnake: the power of the transformation is well built and it is good not to have consideration with humans the personal thing is very interesting about the rituals and if the novel continues to add interesting animals it could be very good maybe a little more explicit with the deaths of people ask me if I will get skills ruling monsters reptiles of lower rank to him? maybe something like "the snake's guide" or when he gets older he meets a village of lamia?
White Snake · C32
White Snake · C32
Akshay007: MC don't forget u have system to analyse the attributes of monster....
But others has to study it.... So naturally it take some time to achieve it.....
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As a thought if NC don't have system then he may need 6 days not 6 hours like the wizard boy......😑😂White Snake · C28
White Snake · C27
WILL BE REWRITTEN!
White Snake · C26
White Snake · C24
White Snake · C22
White Snake · C19
