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  • Feisty Dessert

    Feisty Dessert

    Romance Fiction

    An young girl with a tragic past spends the rest of her life tracking, capturing, and eliminating demons. As a female hunter she had get pride in her hunting skills until she encounter a demon that seem impossible to eliminate. Fueled by an uncontrollable desire to bring this beast down she was sure he would ceased from breathing by her hands. However, her target had an agenda of his own. He wasn't going to sit by while she ruin his fun. So, he executed every perverted trick he could think of to force her stubborn personality to crumble away.

  • Underwraps

    Underwraps

    Romance Fiction

    In a world where magic is based on parlor tricks and illusion. Mystical creatures such as witches, mermaids, dragons, fairies, ect… are all depicted in novels or acted out on the tv screen. None of them are real. Any phenomenon can be proven by science and experimentation, so of course the sudden appearance of vampires being born was also classified as a myth for future generations. By denying their existence by masking the enormous amount of deaths as a natural disaster became a part of history to avoid any future worldwide panic. Of course, just because they were forgotten or misrepresented does not mean they would willingly remain obedient staying hidden in the shadows. The killing did not stop just the number of kills decreased. A few hundred thousand years into the future Amethyst founds herself being roommates with a pair of “vampires” from the old myths in history. How will this high school fantasy nerd cope with her new blood sucking roommates? Will she be able to live out a fairytale romance or will it be a living nightmare?

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It's fine. I do the same thing. What I do is mark my section chapters by bullet points. I add a bullet at the beginning, with the title then add another bullet at the end of the chapter, so I don't get confuse. View More

pandamathers: thanks for pointing it out for me!! the repeat paragraph has been corrected. I think initially it happened cuz I was copy n pasting from word when I started the book and just lost track of my start and end points

The Captains Prize · C6
4 hours ago

pandamathers: thanks for pointing it out for me!! the repeat paragraph has been corrected. I think initially it happened cuz I was copy n pasting from word when I started the book and just lost track of my start and end points

The Captains Prize · C6
4 hours ago
More corrections I think would help. :)
In the first paragraph change “did” to “that”

From experiments to the body and mind to examinations of the soul, the researchers continued to test the children for a year. -- > test “on” the children….

"Those who are capable of walking should help those who can't. Now, go!" -- > Now “lets’s” go! Would work better 😊

Everything was manipulated around. Everything “they touched were” manipulated.
The children dashed towards the forest in the surroundings. -- > The children “then” dashed towards the forest “surrounding them”.
Next paragraph --> they fell in exhaustion : they “felt exhausted”

I really have to commend on your multiple interactions. I'm sad my favorite is a slim now though View More
Iridescent Spirit · C3
18 hours ago
Since you did the same for me I'll continued the favor.

It was truly a coincidence for Jae and Iris to their graduation field trips on the same day, so they decided to meet up. Change “for” to “that” --> add “had” instead of “to”

"I would rawther die than lishhten to you," a harsh tone came from a girl who tried being imposing, but her lisp made her sound charming. She appeared the youngest out of the children. --> rawther --> rather, lishhten --> listen, lisp --> lips

he enters the room and sees the children are still asleep. --> he “entered” the room and “saw” the children “were” still asleep.

So far my favorite is Nora. I can relate to her. Lol. View More
Iridescent Spirit · C2
19 hours ago

IceCream_Girl: Hey fellow author!! Like your concept. Love anything that has to do with reincarnation! Keep up the good work!

Iridescent Spirit · C1
19 hours ago
Nice. Open. That last paragraph where Iris is explaining to Jae needs to be edit. There's some extra words in that, so the flow is off.

Interesting touch making them resemble their original previous life. View More
Iridescent Spirit · C1
19 hours ago
Everyone has things that keeps them busy. Best of luck with your writing! View More

pandamathers: i am a little slow with updates due to work it am hoping to get more posted soon! thanks for the review!!

The Captains Prize
1 day ago

pandamathers: i am a little slow with updates due to work it am hoping to get more posted soon! thanks for the review!!

The Captains Prize
1 day ago

nothingisit4me: You could use a website for names. Like https://***.behindthename.com

Underwraps · C8
1 day ago

nothingisit4me: Haha, maybe someday >3</

Underwraps · C7
1 day ago
Keifer and Amethyst? Yes Eris Ling. I couldn't think up a name other than that. He supposed to like a British descendant though but I don't know no British names. Too many asian novels have corrupted my brain. View More

nothingisit4me: Valentines day is for break ups...and singles to buy their own chocolate.
Their interactions with each other are so cute!
Eris Ling? Ling Eris? Sounds like a Chinese immigrant name.
\>3</

Underwraps · C8
1 day ago

nothingisit4me: Valentines day is for break ups...and singles to buy their own chocolate.
Their interactions with each other are so cute!
Eris Ling? Ling Eris? Sounds like a Chinese immigrant name.
\>3</

Underwraps · C8
1 day ago
Well I wasn't any this descriptive. I owed this enlightenment to the other authors on here. By reading theirs encourage me to make mines better. If I can do it, I believe you can do it too. View More

nothingisit4me: I really like the way you describe scenes. It's one of the easier to imagine imagery, which I'm bad at. >3<=|

Underwraps · C7
1 day ago

nothingisit4me: I really like the way you describe scenes. It's one of the easier to imagine imagery, which I'm bad at. >3<=|

Underwraps · C7
1 day ago
Not really since they just humans with a deadly disease. It kinda how most prejudice people are against other races relocating. Nobody is willing to share their stuff. View More

nothingisit4me: If I heard that information in real life, then I would shrug and say since I didn't die yet, so what. Vampires could anyone huh. They're taking up job positions. >3</

Underwraps · C6
1 day ago

nothingisit4me: If I heard that information in real life, then I would shrug and say since I didn't die yet, so what. Vampires could anyone huh. They're taking up job positions. >3</

Underwraps · C6
1 day ago
Reading Status: C7
I haven't read a pirate story in a really long time, so it caught my interested. The chapters I read were really good just a few proofreading error. I mention in a comment about not repeating paragraphs, I think repeating them will cause confusing. So I would take the repeat out.

Overall it's a well written pirate story and even though I feel for our female protagonist I'm a bit curious how you proceeded on with her journey. Good start. I look forward to your updates. View More
The Captains Prize
1 day ago
I would say don't repeat paragraphs from the previous chapter. It can get confusing and frustrating for those who are bidge reading your novel. At the beginning I thought you repeated a chapter. View More
The Captains Prize · C6
1 day ago
Lol. Well I bet you'll enjoy the next few chapters than. View More

nothingisit4me: All. I love character interactions >3</

Underwraps · C4
3 days ago

nothingisit4me: All. I love character interactions >3</

Underwraps · C4
3 days ago
Nah, I got your back. I'll read and fire you some comments. So be prepare for your inbox to get spam. View More

nothingisit4me: Instead of spirit stones, I also like comments. But that's too much to ask for considering the increasing chapters...>3</

Underwraps · C1
3 days ago

nothingisit4me: Instead of spirit stones, I also like comments. But that's too much to ask for considering the increasing chapters...>3</

Underwraps · C1
3 days ago
Thank you very much. I really didn't want to jump into the romance even though this is a enemies to lover story I wanted to create a story that builds up to there encounter with one another. Thank you for the honest review. View More

NEidarous: Great start! I love romantic stories that took its time to build into the romance. I like the world background and development so far. can't say much with only four chapters but I waiting for more to give a full honest review. Great work author!

Feisty Dessert
3 days ago

NEidarous: Great start! I love romantic stories that took its time to build into the romance. I like the world background and development so far. can't say much with only four chapters but I waiting for more to give a full honest review. Great work author!

Feisty Dessert
3 days ago
Thank you so much. With great persuasion you can always change one's opinion because the world is forever changing. Thanks again for your review. View More

NEidarous: I like this one as well, I don't usually like vampires stories but this one is interesting. I like your writing style,I love descriptive style; gives more life to the story. Some errors can be easily fixed by more editing but overall readable. Great work author.

Underwraps
3 days ago

NEidarous: I like this one as well, I don't usually like vampires stories but this one is interesting. I like your writing style,I love descriptive style; gives more life to the story. Some errors can be easily fixed by more editing but overall readable. Great work author.

Underwraps
3 days ago
I'm so glad you think so. I wasn't sure how it would come across. My 10th grade self wrote that scene and the current "me" was just rewriting it to be more descriptive. View More

nothingisit4me: Haha, poor Tala reacting as if she had seen an illicit relationship. >3</

Underwraps · C5
3 days ago

nothingisit4me: Haha, poor Tala reacting as if she had seen an illicit relationship. >3</

Underwraps · C5
3 days ago
All of them or just Amethyst x Eris? View More

nothingisit4me: And, I like reading their interactions dear author. >3</

Underwraps · C4
3 days ago

nothingisit4me: And, I like reading their interactions dear author. >3</

Underwraps · C4
3 days ago
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