I wonder
An hour later, Cynthia felt light enough to almost skip on her way out of the clinic. She was able to see revenge's face very clearly this time and he looked so much like her!
Urban · MerrySweet
Why name the baby Revenge? If this is real life, that child will practically hate that name once grown. I wonder why grown adults do so much to drag innocent children into their adult squabbles without thought to what it'll do to a child. What would a Mother say if her child why she gave him such name? Greatly annoying!
As the car raced through the streets, Cynthia was in a better mood. The boy drove well and she was going to have her checkup in the morning which meant that she'd get to see revenge and hear his heartbeats, that was enough to put her in a good mood.
Urban · MerrySweet
My country people, gather here. We have Agbaya meeting 😂😂😂 If you know you know. If you don't know which country or language this is, I cannot help you 😂😂😂
"Just like his mother." He responded.
Urban · Hassy_101
That's what jealousy, bitterness and hate does to you... Keeps you behind the one you hate, never moving ahead
"How is this possible?" Her jealousy flared. "Why does she always find ways to outshine me? Why?! She had a wealthy family who loved her so much, a rich boyfriend, even after they were destroyed, she got herself a wealthy and powerful husband. Now this? What about me? Why do I always have to be below you, Jeslyn? Why?!" Angry tears ran down her face.
Urban · Hassy_101
So Childish
'You've never composed a song for me before. My sister-in-law has always been biased. She didn't even add me to the song. So unfair. Am I not her brother-in-law?' he pouted.
Urban · Hassy_101
Valen, Valen, Congratulatiins! You are now officially certified little villian
Valen gritted his teeth and then responded. "Fine," however, in his mind, there was another scheme brewing. She said he can't cause trouble but never said he can't instigate others to cause trouble.
Urban · Hassy_101
I knew from onset that Valen was Rossa's Child
Maverick's eyes narrowed at his conclusion. If everything was staged, then it means Rossa or he was the target. If the plan was to ruin him, then why switch places with Rossa and why snatch Valen from Rossa?
Urban · Hassy_101
So Mechanically. Are they robots?
"My room… in 10 minutes…" he walked out after that.
Urban · Hassy_101
Correct "blown to smitten" to "Blown to SMITHEREENS." That's the correct usage and spelling. You can look it up too
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Urban · Hassy_101
A Mother does not hate her child otherwise she's no Mother and that goes against nature. It'll be great you look up the Word "Mother." Mother is beyond just birthing a Child. The logic you described in your statement is why the World is all out of order and we have too many weirdos.
"No mother hates their child, dear, she must also be suffering right now," Jeslyn said while stroking his back.
Urban · Hassy_101
Correct the Word 'ACCOMPLISH' Right word is 'ACCOMPLICE' ACCOMPLISH: Means to be successful or fulfilled at something ACCOMPLICE: partner or someone who took part in a crime.
Arthur sneered. "No matter how powerful a person is, how can you go along with it? It's not like you were forced. You just wanted to use this opportunity. Doesn't that make you accomplish?"
Fantasy · Flow07
There is no English word as EMPRESS except you mean the female version of EMPEROR. I think the word you want to use is IMPRESS which means to surprise or give someone pleasant surprise he/she wasn't expecting
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Urban · Hope_seeker
I must commend your bravery to write a story. You've done well so far and you have a good story here. However, I want to suggest you get an editor. Someone who has a good knowledge of the English language and its structure because I've come across a lot of Sentences that was wrong in your story. For example: The man talking here, shouted "I am Clear." But that is wrong sentence. The right sentence structure is "Am I Clear?" The first one is a statement saying that he is clear. The second which is correct is a question to the girls asking if they understood him. So, please, get an Editor.
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Urban · Hope_seeker
"Snapped her fingers to 'WALK' him up" is wrong. Please check typo error in this paragraph and correct to "WAKE him up.
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History · Violet_167
Bad man! 😂
"Yes, it did. Everything is back to normal so you can relax now. Alessandra doesn't want to be reminded of last night so don't bring it up in the future. Act like it never happened," Edgar said with a smile that widened more as the lies left his mouth.
History · Violet_167
This woman is really awful and childish
In the end, Jennifer had to accept the ring. As she reached where Edmund was holding it, Priscilla took the ring and tossed it outside.
History · Violet_167
Oh Gosh! 😂 This little Sherlock!
«You forgot mommy's money!» she said.
Urban · xiaohai_23
This girl has weird thought pattern
«Two husbands, daddy. Husbands,» Scarlet said, stressing every letter of that word.
Urban · xiaohai_23
Correct; 'Her mommy also said to be POLICE...' The word should read 'POLITE'
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Urban · xiaohai_23
Such abrupt ending. Not good and not creatively done well.
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Remarriage: His Billionaire Ex-wife
General · H.D.Cynthia