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Sunnyfrank

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Witty, Talented and sports lover. Interested in anything historical which led to my inert love of collecting Antiques.

2019-01-05 Joined Nigeria

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I wonder

An hour later, Cynthia felt light enough to almost skip on her way out of the clinic. She was able to see revenge's face very clearly this time and he looked so much like her!

Farewell My CEO Husband : I Named His Baby 'Revenge'

Farewell My CEO Husband : I Named His Baby 'Revenge'

Urban · MerrySweet

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That's what jealousy, bitterness and hate does to you... Keeps you behind the one you hate, never moving ahead

"How is this possible?" Her jealousy flared. "Why does she always find ways to outshine me? Why?! She had a wealthy family who loved her so much, a rich boyfriend, even after they were destroyed, she got herself a wealthy and powerful husband. Now this? What about me? Why do I always have to be below you, Jeslyn? Why?!" Angry tears ran down her face. 

Contract Marriage: The Replacement Groom

Contract Marriage: The Replacement Groom

Urban · Hassy_101

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So Childish

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'You've never composed a song for me before. My sister-in-law has always been biased. She didn't even add me to the song. So unfair. Am I not her brother-in-law?' he pouted. 

Contract Marriage: The Replacement Groom

Contract Marriage: The Replacement Groom

Urban · Hassy_101

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Valen, Valen, Congratulatiins! You are now officially certified little villian

Valen gritted his teeth and then responded. "Fine," however, in his mind, there was another scheme brewing. She said he can't cause trouble but never said he can't instigate others to cause trouble.

Contract Marriage: The Replacement Groom

Contract Marriage: The Replacement Groom

Urban · Hassy_101

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I knew from onset that Valen was Rossa's Child

Maverick's eyes narrowed at his conclusion. If everything was staged, then it means Rossa or he was the target. If the plan was to ruin him, then why switch places with Rossa and why snatch Valen from Rossa? 

Contract Marriage: The Replacement Groom

Contract Marriage: The Replacement Groom

Urban · Hassy_101

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So Mechanically. Are they robots?

"My room… in 10 minutes…" he walked out after that. 

Contract Marriage: The Replacement Groom

Contract Marriage: The Replacement Groom

Urban · Hassy_101

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Correct "blown to smitten" to "Blown to SMITHEREENS." That's the correct usage and spelling. You can look it up too

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Correct the Word 'ACCOMPLISH' Right word is 'ACCOMPLICE' ACCOMPLISH: Means to be successful or fulfilled at something ACCOMPLICE: partner or someone who took part in a crime.

Arthur sneered. "No matter how powerful a person is, how can you go along with it? It's not like you were forced. You just wanted to use this opportunity. Doesn't that make you accomplish?"

Tangled by Fate

Tangled by Fate

Fantasy · Flow07

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There is no English word as EMPRESS except you mean the female version of EMPEROR. I think the word you want to use is IMPRESS which means to surprise or give someone pleasant surprise he/she wasn't expecting

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Mafia Boss wife

Mafia Boss wife

Urban · Hope_seeker

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I must commend your bravery to write a story. You've done well so far and you have a good story here. However, I want to suggest you get an editor. Someone who has a good knowledge of the English language and its structure because I've come across a lot of Sentences that was wrong in your story. For example: The man talking here, shouted "I am Clear." But that is wrong sentence. The right sentence structure is "Am I Clear?" The first one is a statement saying that he is clear. The second which is correct is a question to the girls asking if they understood him. So, please, get an Editor.

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Mafia Boss wife

Mafia Boss wife

Urban · Hope_seeker

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"Snapped her fingers to 'WALK' him up" is wrong. Please check typo error in this paragraph and correct to "WAKE him up.

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The Duke's Masked Wife

The Duke's Masked Wife

History · Violet_167

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Bad man! 😂

"Yes, it did. Everything is back to normal so you can relax now. Alessandra doesn't want to be reminded of last night so don't bring it up in the future. Act like it never happened," Edgar said with a smile that widened more as the lies left his mouth. 

The Duke's Masked Wife

The Duke's Masked Wife

History · Violet_167

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This woman is really awful and childish

In the end, Jennifer had to accept the ring. As she reached where Edmund was holding it, Priscilla took the ring and tossed it outside.

The Duke's Masked Wife

The Duke's Masked Wife

History · Violet_167

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This girl has weird thought pattern

«Two husbands, daddy. Husbands,» Scarlet said, stressing every letter of that word.

CEO's Runaway Mate and Her Cubs

CEO's Runaway Mate and Her Cubs

Urban · xiaohai_23

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Correct; 'Her mommy also said to be POLICE...' The word should read 'POLITE'

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