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Story is off to a great start and I’m always a sucker for genshin stories. Story is a typical mc that get isekaied, this time being genshin. The mc is alright so far. I like that he started off at a decent level of strength rather than a weak level 1, and i would like the mc to be decently strong but not too op to the point where there is no consequences. If he got a cheat of weapon mastery then I would recommend him to either focus on a specific one or incorporate like all of them cause stories usually heavily lose focus and just forget the side powers. Same thing if mc get multiple visions or not to focus on either one or all. The grammar is good, story progressing at an ok rate, nothing much is happening. Keep up the update! Story so far is a 7/10 but can go up or down later on.

Love the reactions of the characters. I always love reading these types of fanfics where characters get to see and experience the past, present, and future and watch how important the information comes to them!