Webnovel Author: fauxis - Novel Collection

Sunny has become too much of an sacrificial hero. I didn't mind it until now but this is too much. I hope there is a good plan or else I will quit this novel because of how ridiculous plot rumour is despite the existence of Fated Attribute.

I remembered after reading more chapters. It would have been great if there was some kind of foreshadowing as to how he ended up in this kind of mindset. I wouldn't be surprised if people quit reading the novel because of his kindness unless there was some kidn of foreshadowing for them to convince themselves to read more since they are unlikely to connect his trauma since it's something that happened quite a few chapters back. I myself only continued reading because it's enjoyable and because of tarot club.

I am curious as to how the church of fool mananged to built it's own churches in some regions of southern continent.

I just don't understand as to why he is avenging a stranger? Is it because of his past of being adopted by Aurore. This is just too much recklesness. Did he completely forget about saving Aurore? Can anyone bother to explain?

Main lead is too considerate and suicidal. I hate reading novels with such a main lead. I would've already quit reading if not for the fact that I loved book 1 a bit too much.

Enjoyed it!

I don't like Martha. She didn't impress me like what June had done.

Better than Noah but the woman doesn't impress me as much as what June had done.

I might be saying this to read more chapters but isn't 15 privilege chapters just too much? Other popular novels I have read doesn't have more than 10(usually it's 6 or 3 but let's ignore that since this novel is popular) chapters, I'm sure about that.

I see. I think you should type it down as a note at the end of a chapter.

When did the slime level up? Back when mc battled Sphinx army? I hope there's a good answer. The story's good other than many plot holes.

I think you're focusing too much on characters. Doing it now and then is okay but if you do it repeatedly, it won't be good pacing. Also the characteristics of these characters, you just bring them out without an proper explanation. It's more like slowly building up those characteristics so that readers won't be surprised when you bring stuff like Alice can beat up whoever she wants. The writing is chaotic os because of this. The reason I'm stating this is because you aren't slowing down your pace.

Very Interesting.