It seems you got chp 22 and 21 mixed up, you should swap them and fix that.
ch 22 An Ambush of Horrific Proportions
Fantasy · XKARNATION
You also need to work on your grammar if you really think there are no errors...
ch 167 Union Head
Fantasy · Allenheim
Oh, one last thing, you didn't mention it happened to the mc, that's kind of a big deal.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
Movies · Lord_Bell
I didn't even register there were 4 stars there until you told me and I went back to look.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
Movies · Lord_Bell
You're right I should of somehow known what the four stars were...
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
Movies · Lord_Bell
I liked it when he finished his revenge and cut all ties. This chap ruins that... I guess I should have been prepared for this though based on the title.
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That's not true, plot armor refers to things that make no sense in the scope of what is happening, like things that come out of the blue, out of no where to save the mc... It's not plot armor if it is built up and falls in line with the story.
ch 144 Defeating Death!
Eastern · KevinAscending
Maybe, but what about the pain power? I thought he feels no pain and can even send it back or something?
ch 25 Red Snow - Sunstone - Breakthrough - Cedric's Greed
Fantasy · Absolute_Author
Well you make your mc seem like an alpha but then you give him beta moments, also his powers for some reason don't always work for whatever reason I may or may not have missed. And I personally don't like when obvious threats are ignored and then the mc gets beat by someone as if surprised, when he should have known the entire time.
ch 25 Red Snow - Sunstone - Breakthrough - Cedric's Greed
Fantasy · Absolute_Author
So he's going to teach bandits how to get stronger so they can hurt innocent people better?
ch 0 5 Farming Village
Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
Are you serious, no wonder this never became popular... Whelp good luck, I'd put a review but I bet it'll just get deleted.
ch 25 Red Snow - Sunstone - Breakthrough - Cedric's Greed
Fantasy · Absolute_Author
So far the MC has been very disappointing, to put it mildly.
ch 20 Eventful Morning - Unreasonable Jealousy - Affection - Intervention - Portal to the Spirit Mines
Fantasy · Absolute_Author
I can't believe I missed this review, wish I saw it earlier.
It seems you missed a big portion of what I wrote or choose to ignore it, either way it's fine just write however you want don't worry about me. Not like I said anything all that negative anyways, don't let me stop you from writing about kids if that's what you want, it's just not for me.
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Others · Ailzonius
A entire chapter of talking, consider me impressed. This is one of the many things that hold eastern novels back from being great.
ch 24 Blood Race!
Heavenly World of Killing: I Can Extract Everything!
Fantasy · OmniPrime