naming them numbers is s dehumanizing.
ch 32 The Mage Tower
Fantasy · jdbeue
please for the love of god use quotation marks when some one speaks. it is very hard to understand what is exposition and internal dialogue vs actual speach.
ch 0 2 Waking Up(Warning Nudity and Sex Scenes R-18)
War · scifiistheway
I think youn need a different law or you are misunderstanding echolocation. him being able to find the parents makes absolutly no sense when using echolocation. thats not how sound works. I think you should explaine it more in the line that they know the unique character of the fathers voice and the bounty hunter can amplify and modulate sound so finely that he can pick it up from great distances.
ch 15 The Auction P2
Fantasy · naffan
the romans used iron helmets in 400 ad
ch 0 1 Reincarnation
Heir of Aurelian
History · Zentmeister