I hyped myself for reading this but sadly oIam disappointed. I like akashi from KnB and COTE series and it could be mega combination. Start is witchout any sense, full of loopholes. Akaji or whatever is this name written escaped from white room, then what about akashi? Whole idea making him start from white rum ruin whole story. Why not just reborn as akashi in COTE world with his family like he had it in KnB? More logical, open more options, MC background is not limited to white room which is just a rat hole witchout exit for character development. IQ of MC is maximum 100 which is below the average... He seems like cringe dude wanting to be cool but still end up being someone's lapdog. I had seen few COTE fan fictions and to this moment only one was somehow readable. People too much rely in them on the plot... Why you create some character and end up following the same plot. If i want to reread the story I doesn't need some cringe dude in it. Generally whole idea for the story is one of maybe the best on site but as for the work? It is total trash.
This book has been deleted.
And it seems it's true as he didn't add any shit in a month.
Can't really say much when it's only beginning but for sure you spent more time about MC info than about book... First you should make story i think?
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