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the novel needs serious rewriting, don't mind the grammar mistakes, the writing style itself needs some work, like when changing POV the author does it too many times and for insignificant stuff...
"Kid's dinner is ready!"
Summoner: Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy 路 Duke_Asmodeus
finally because I personally think, that Damien's "flashback" was UNNECESSARILY LONG! like please remind me who was the protagonist of the story? because with so many chapters dedicated to him I kinda forgot... I really had to go back to the previous chapters to remember what novel I was reading!
We will be back to Mc's (Roy) story
Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
Fantasy 路 Crimson_ink
same
"It was a shame how he carried on馃幍."
I Quit Being The Villain
Urban 路 Kurupts
Don. Don. DOONN!!!
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My Necromancer Class
Fantasy 路 Aero182
what about the necklace...
[Accessory: True Spirit Ring +5 (Ignore Armor, Summon True Spirit, 20% All Resistances)]
Online Game: I Began By Enhancing Endlessly With My SSS Rank Talent
Games 路 Tobacco Grows Cold Easily
BS
It was not important if the class could deal high damage. Being handsome was the number one priority.
Online Game: I Began By Enhancing Endlessly With My SSS Rank Talent
Games 路 Tobacco Grows Cold Easily
BS
Zhou Han directly chose to be a Swordsman. He felt that it was convenient to use a sword, and it was quite handsome.
Online Game: I Began By Enhancing Endlessly With My SSS Rank Talent
Games 路 Tobacco Grows Cold Easily
nightbringer and mage sound good to me
Swordsman, Monk, Archer, Mage, Clergyman, Nightbringer, and Lancer.
Online Game: I Began By Enhancing Endlessly With My SSS Rank Talent
Games 路 Tobacco Grows Cold Easily
couldn't you make it like.. apprentice mage mage apprentice wizard wizard apprentice sage sage and depending on your attitudes and ways of study, make different wariations like... witch/warlock (female/male), battle mage, imperial mage, Arcane mage and many more
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My Incestuous Life
Fantasy 路 _taki
for example capital city torken of aldrach empire...
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My Incestuous Life
Fantasy 路 _taki
Spare the sympathy, Everybody wants to be my ene-ahem ahem
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My Incestuous Life
Fantasy 路 _taki
it should be "I hope you don't disappoint me Lilian."
聽 "The second pair will be Lilian and Nix, I hope I don't disappoint you Lilian."聽 (I)聽
Will of chaos
Fantasy 路 Pendragon_DNT
saliva = babysitter ???????? 馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ
While talking to Alice suddenly there is a gooey liquid on my head, I pull away and see that it was Diana, the liquid was the large amount of babysitter coming out of her mouth.
Will of chaos
Fantasy 路 Pendragon_DNT
Armenian???? author please look through the chapters at least once after you google translate them...
"I've never felt anything like this, it's like thousands of different Auras crammed together, it was bizarre and chaotic, but somehow there was Armenian in that chaos and he managed to control that Aura, Jonas instinctively put himself into battle mode." (Mari)
Will of chaos
Fantasy 路 Pendragon_DNT
walking blood bags
"A man and woman in their twenties, Humans." (I)
Will of chaos
Fantasy 路 Pendragon_DNT
when will you stop using "brothers"?! it's "siblings"
After the brothers have climbed into the arena, Mari begins the fight.
Will of chaos
Fantasy 路 Pendragon_DNT
Author you seem to misunderstand something... ground floor = first floor... it's called ground floor because it's the first floor above ground. So the mansion has four (4) floors and not three!
The workshops are on the third floor, on the second floor are the bedrooms, on the first floor are offices and rooms that are unused for the time being, on the ground floor there is a ballroom, the entrance, the dining room, the bathroom with thermal water and the kitchen.
Will of chaos
Fantasy 路 Pendragon_DNT
familiars?
"Families are summoned or contracted creatures." (脡rica)
Will of chaos
Fantasy 路 Pendragon_DNT
breeding jobs 馃ぃ
It seems that breeding jobs are not as easy as I thought, if it wasn't for my ability to learn skills from eating others I wouldn't even try to learn about them.
Will of chaos
Fantasy 路 Pendragon_DNT
maybe "most of the planet" as in literally the planet itself 馃槅
To reach its original state as a 200,000-ton paragon of annihilation would likely require consuming most of this planet.
Alien Evolution System
Fantasy 路 John_Doever