Shaminess

1mth

Posted

Interesting concept. However it is AI generated and therefore unreadable as far as I’m concerned.

Game Of Thrones: Reborn AS Pokémon

Book&Literature · AmouxCreationsX

Shaminess

1mth

Commented

Do you have any idea how annoying this is to those of us who listen on audio instead of read? I’m withholding your stones in protest!!

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Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

Shaminess

2mth

Commented

He is a prince not a lord. More casual treason.

"Her father is a household knight of mine… but a visit can be arranged if you wish, Lord Renly."

Raiden's Storm (ASOIAF)

Video Games · SovereignOfHeaven

Shaminess

2mth

Commented

“Your grace” is only for royalty. So he basically committed casual treason right there and could be killed for it.

"And your comely appearance is wasted on a heart of venom," I replied, smiling slightly. "Such a pity… I will not waste your precious time further, Your Grace."

Raiden's Storm (ASOIAF)

Video Games · SovereignOfHeaven

Shaminess

2mth

Commented

The little limericks at the end of each chapter are really fun. And they work. I give all my stones whenever I have time to read this fic

ch 198 Chapter II: Uppity Nords and Uppity Magi

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

Shaminess

4mth

Posted

The idea is interesting and it has a lot of potential. Sadly the writing style makes it difficult to enjoy the story. The repeat of the same sentences in different words feels like unnecessary padding and the constant use of big words feels like the author is trying too hard to make sure we know they are intelligent. In addition, the dialogue between characters is lacking in volume and the conversations feel stunted. I think this fic is salvageable though if more effort is moved away from describing everything in as big words as possible and into focusing more on the dialogue between characters.

HOTD: I'm a Targaryen Princess with cheats

Movies · MrGood23

Shaminess

5mth

Commented

The only thing not to love about this fic is that you don’t post 10 chaps a day. Great job author, keep going!

ch 85 Chapter 85: The invasion of the Iron Islands P1

Dragonlord (HP × ASOIAF)

Book&Literature · Dragonspectre

Shaminess

1yr

Commented

I dread the moment this novel is finished

ch 52 Epilogue04-A Crown of Roses

The Dragonwolf

Book&Literature · Gladiusx

Shaminess

1yr

Posted

the MC is extremely unlikable. massive 👎 from me

One Piece-Crawling To The Top

Anime & Comics · Doasist

Shaminess

1yr

Posted

I gave it a 1 star mostly because of disappointment. Great premise, interesting read, then turns into harem smut trash. Didn't even have a harem tag. If there was one, I wouldn't have wasted my time.

A Hollow in DC and Beyond.

Anime & Comics · Azazyel

Shaminess

1yr

Commented

I love this story

ch 14 Arron of Skagos pt 1

House of The Dragon: Dovahkiin

TV · Caio_Bernardo

Shaminess

1yr

Commented

me: ah this author is funny. looks like this will be a fun light hearted story I can enjoy *baby gets murdered* me: ....

ch 0 1 First time

HP| wanting to be a magic swordsman

Book&Literature · foodieToodie

Shaminess

1yr

Posted

a superhero who isn't even a good person. the negative review is because the story had good potential and I was looking forward to it. but the author decided to have an MC who just randomly robs people. it just ruined it for me

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

Movies · AlienWarlord

Shaminess

1yr

Commented

first act is to steal from innocent people so he take a girl out. yeah that's pathetic. it's not like he is starving or in a desperate situation where he needs the money for something big. he can always figure out another way or get a job or go junk diving and fixing things and selling it. or even wait until after he meets the ancient one and see if any of his new skills might be helpful. but resorting to robbing people as a first instinct just tells me this "super hero" isn't even a decent person in the first place

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I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

Movies · AlienWarlord

Shaminess

1yr

Replied to LordOfSandDunes

I haven't noticed you had another one. I'll give it a read! keep up the good work man!

ch 0 1 A new beginning

lord Ramiel (ASOIAF/GOT fanfic)

TV · LordOfSandDunes

Shaminess

1yr

Replied to Shaminess

also, this is looking good so far. looking forward to seeing where the story goes

ch 0 1 A new beginning

lord Ramiel (ASOIAF/GOT fanfic)

TV · LordOfSandDunes

Shaminess

1yr

Commented

do you have any idea how excited I am rn to see a story posted by someone from the UAE? AND ITS ASOIAF. We need to be friends man

ch 0 1 A new beginning

lord Ramiel (ASOIAF/GOT fanfic)

TV · LordOfSandDunes

Shaminess

1yr

Replied to mark_kiple

I agree with OP, but also another idea (since the whole mind control thing was used a lot in other fanfiction) is to simply have someone other than Loki lead the invasion. thanos has other followers. maybe one of his daughters or one of the members of the black hand (is that what they're called? they're black something but I'm not sure)

ch 192 Aight, getting more complicated here