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"If you can't look at the bright side, I will sit with you in the dark." 😍 This hits the spot. Dom is the epitome of male lead with the greatest EQ. He live up to his promise to keep his mind open for her and their relationship. This kind of man who is willing to walk with you not only in blissful moments but even in the dark. He will gladly accept your demons and embrace all its darkness. What a great line and great character.

I hope that authors would double check the proper usage of pronouns and grammatical errors.

The storyline is actually good but I hope that you could double check the grammatical errors, especially the use of proper pronouns. Thank you

Excited for more.

It was said that she's engaged or in a relationship, but was never mentioned that they'd married. If I remember correctly, it was said she "hooked up".

Hmm, regret it later

I agree

Looking forward to read this

That's true

Hmmm...

It's interesting

Same thoughts

Hmmm. It seems likr like Trial Marriage plot, but gonna give it a shot to see if it's different and interesting.

True, but we never really the extent a person can get low to achieve what they want. I think that's no longer love, but more of obsession like the more you can't get it, the more you're into it. It's more like being selfish and greed.

OMG!!!

Exactly my thoughts.

The father's not worth it.

Yes, protect this little munchin' at all cost.

No one would beat her at using wit and sarcasm to silently kill the other person. Haha

Yes, gurl the ML (hoping that he is not) is indeed despicable. Hmm... that's right you beed to teach him a lesson or two so he can have a little bit awakening from his egoistic persona, let him know his rightful place. Show him how fierce a policewoman can be when triggered. Let him feel how an angry tigress is when hi baby cub is messed with. Haha, I find it cute when she's on full momma protective mode. The best thing about her being reborn is that she and Joy found each other. At least now, Joy would hace someone who loves him, and she too have found new meaning in life.