It didn't hurt my feelings. It's just I'm a little down that day so I maybe message it in a wrong tone or you just imagining things. Also, I know that my story is not good and I didn't pointed it to you or them. I'm not that good in English so I'm just trying to improve it on my own way. And about Rimuru, well you know that the story is still ongoing. Most of you can't understand it as you still didn't know the whole story so I know your point about that. I just told them that I already have things about that cause I don't want to slip something up for the future chapters. I hope you understand it. Thank you.
"It's now all up to you, the chosen one, Rimuru Tempest."
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I'll take that. Although.... not now.
Unique Skill/s: [Assassin]
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Just the timeline. It will be bad if I follow the plots too,
ch 11 She is My Sister
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Sorry. I don't know what will I do as I'm not that old. Also, Rimuru's personality is still outgoing and he's just purposely acting like that because for some some some reason.
ch 0 7 Should We Call You 'The Little Heroine?'
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It is not perfect. The skill is just photographic and I believe that it doesn't make anyone remember all of the thing happened moreover over a million year.
'But Ciel, how did you know about it when I don't have that kind of memory?'
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Maybe some unimportant plot will but still not the same.
ch 0 9 My Name is Tempest Rimuru
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Nope. I already have ruined it so not a chance.
ch 0 9 My Name is Tempest Rimuru
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Secret. You will know in the future if you still reading it hahaha.
What do you think about this story plot? Is there any plot holes or none?
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Hahaha. You're right thought.
'Now... Wait! it doesn't have any meaning if I still have this power I have now! I need to create a new body with few of my abilities first!'
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It's alright. It's just I'm still lack of experience in writing and I write this stuff as I tried to gain a little bit more experience so I will be able to write a more decent original story than this one.
ch 0 4 It Is For Me To Know And For Them To Find Out
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I'm sorry to tell you this but I don't want to rewrite this cause first, I already told to all of you that I just right this for myself. Second, please read all of the descriptions before you comment that. Third, please don't judge some of the things you don't like for now as it is just the fourth chapter. What if there is a meaning behind that all but you already judged it because it displeases you. Please think first before you comment something that can hurt people's feelings. Thank you.
"It's now all up to you, the chosen one, Rimuru Tempest."
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Is that a positive or negative opinion? Oh well.
'Now... Wait! it doesn't have any meaning if I still have this power I have now! I need to create a new body with few of my abilities first!'
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Sorry if you didn't like it but I already have decided what I'm going to do so please stop it or I'll probably lose my interest to write it. But thanks for the honest opinion.
ch 0 4 It Is For Me To Know And For Them To Find Out
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Here!
(I just edit it a little but it's not mine. It is on the chapter comment here->.)
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Alright! Thanks for suggesting.
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Alright! I'll just make it a little longer and it will depends on the magicules that he will spend.
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Alright! The third ability is already taken! Thank you for suggesting.
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Ah. He is not weak. He just thought he is weak as he wants it but he didn't thought that that 'weakened form' is actually not weak. Like he's so oblivious to understand what weak really is.
Rimuru tried to act hard kile it scares him, for them to underestimate him more and show Rimuru how they use their skill. But it seems like his plan will eventually be ruined by Idiot number 3 who he just recently met.
Rimuru In Ninja World
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