I am very thank full for this well rounded story and am waiting for the next chapter... Thank you dear Author for giving all of us this easy and enjoyable read.. keep up the good work
This book as a chance at being good if the Author would pay more attention to names. I feel as if the Author needs and editor to correct some of the Grammer errors. I am only 20 so chapters into the story. I will give it 10 more to improve.
still reading... waiting for more
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I am at chapter 39, and so far, I like the concept but do wish the writing was more fluent. it has the feel of direct translation with no polish. so. writer do not give up on this. I look forward to read more.
good chapter but could you please correct the he and she. they break up the read
I thank you for another great chapter
I ask because I started writing a story and need pointers
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Fantasy · _oinkchan
Thank you for the chapter. I really like your story so far, but I must ask how do you do it?
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Fantasy · _oinkchan
Thank you for the chapter. I really enjoy your writing. How do you do it thought?
It may have taken me a week to read the 500 plus chapters but I had to fight myself to put it down. I look forward to many more chapters and to see the universe through this writers eyes. Keep up the great work and the chat comedy kills me all the time
S.P.E.C.T.O.R - [A Sci-fi space adventure with fantasy elements]
Sci-fi · Sweeps83