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I read only 3-4 chapter, truth be told I am disappointed why because how author tried build MC relationship. Like MC is highly trained milatery officer so why was he openly staring at the girl when he could easily without anyone noticing could do that but he didn't which made questionable about his quality as soldier 2nd in the roof their talk almost like not real but fack like MC is not good with ladies but he sweet talked out of a situation and what did talk about in roof because they took all the lunch break period to talk..in the end I would much preferred if the the would progress like this MC being a silent protector and their love story would start girl hating the MC or misunderstanding him like she is the one of top beauty of her class so she have to have some jealous enemy, they tried trick her but he saves her but she misunderstanding him... View More
Adopted Soldier
4 weeks ago

HopeBones5: Probably a translation thing, thanks for your review Ill try to see if i can get through the early chapters!, wish me luck!

Monster Integration
4 weeks ago

NouH: I have to agree with you on that, i read 250+ chapters and its starting to piss me off already, everything is so convenient for the MC, everything just happens at the right time and with such a big coincidence that its stupid, not only that but seems like the author don't put too much effort in solving a problem the hard way, everything has to be convenient for the mc like, ''Oh mc needs to get strong fast, but oh wait, that ruin he just entered has a extremelly rare metal that even the strongest warriors on the universe would kill to get it from him, what a LUCKY CHANCE 1 in 154154426451 trillion, the mc is so lucky WOW, AI is impressed'' and then comes his cold bi*ch wife that just gives 0 f**ks about her kids and her husband sacrifice for his family and just straight out kills herself because, F**k the children, they can grow up without a father and a mother, and then not only that but then there's the MC with has bs reaction to it like

AI - MC your wife just committed suicide
MC - What you gotta be kidding me
AI - But wait, i actually gave her master necklace that can SAVE her from any harm and turn her into a eternal spirit immortal regenerating body with infinite lifespam, WOW, SO INCREDIBLE< SUCH COINCIDENCES, Master such is generous
MC - (His reaction right after knowing his wife committed suicide but was revived because of a magic item) Oh, that's cool, good.

And then his wife is like, '' What i tried to commit suicide how am i alive, how cares about the children i only want my husbando *See's message from MC*, OMG he is alive, and then everything proceeds like she never tried to commit suicide or that wasn't even a big deal like wtf.

Swallowed Star
1 month ago

Tane: Began reading this as a reading addict like any other person and although i had nothing against the generic vrmmo setting i soon encounted problems with the translation/editing. The first thing was that as i was reading names would random change like "big guy" turned into some korean name, and "lightning spheres" turned into "current proliferation".
The second part is the one that made me drop this novel as it was to impactful for the story; large chunks of the story would be missing making wierd jumps in the storyline, especially when the mc thinks back to that moment that obviosly happened but we never got to read. Parts missing are also good parts like love development and quest rewards.

Taming Master
2 months ago

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The Lust System
2 months ago

Andylovescandy: Writing Quality: 2 star = The grammar is very messy, it feels like I am reading a novel from lmntl, but its more confusing. Its still understandable to say the least so 2 stars.
Stability of Updates: 5 star = Author keeps releasing a lot of chapters which is nice.
Story development: 1 star = I have read the author works before and I realized that he keeps wanting to push this novel in the same direction as Hitose note, which was way better than this.
The only difference is, some new anime like Detective conan is added and instead of taking Raku's place author went for his brother.
The relationships are awkward, I get that, its the type of novel were MC is great and every girls keeps falling for our MC but this is the same place where the author fails and makes this novel worse than Hitose note or any other novel he wrote before.
The girls keep falling for MC but Author keeps cock blocking himself, even though we all know that he will have s*x with the girl a chapter later on.
Character design: 1 star: Even though the characters are from other animes, author fails to maintain the character's behaviors even though he doesn't have to think about any of them. (I know its hard to write and bla bla bla... but these characters already exist in other works, so its just copying the character's characteristics but author still fails to do so.)
Let's leave the other character's for now, but the author can't decide even on the MC characteristics. Sometimes he is dense, sometimes he is way to clever and flirty, sometimes he is a gentleman but other time is a creepy pervert.
He keeps acting like every girl belongs to him even though sometimes he keeps stopping himself from getting them. Like make your mind, do you want them or not.
And the characters, Every chapter at least 5 new characters are introduced and every one of them sounds and acts like a harem candidate, By the count of it, MC is fu*king every women in his town. I am on chapter 58 right now and I lost count of how many girls there are by the 10th chapter.
World Background: 2 Star = The world is very confusing since a lot of different anime's are cramped into one place. But props to the author for trying but it could be done better.

Conclusion: I am not hating on author or his work like I said, I liked his previous novel before but I am quite disappointed since instead of improving he went downhill from what he created.
If you want to read this novel keep in mind that its not going to be sophisticated in the very least. Its like a very plain ****** novel written by a hyped up author, who wants to make his novel good but it turns out bad. It's not that bad like some novels in this site but its not good either.
If you want to binge read something due to you having a lot of free time, go ahead and read this novel.
I suggest author to focus on making a single chapter perfect than releasing 10 in a day. Quality over Quantity.

Start by Becoming a Mangaka
2 months ago
Sorry but MC has become too arrogant for my taste... View More
Dual Cultivation · C136
2 months ago

The_God_Asura: Look author I liked your story up to chapter 30 and a few, I gave some chances for the story is continuedi to read, more know already is in chapter 70 and still you did not leave the danmachi, in addition to the MC still be so weak that comes to discouragement.

I then stopped reading, more from what I saw and the revisions of the story, is still in the world of danmachi, and his story came in chapter 500.

This is insane if I've ever been discouraged in chapter 70, do you imagine I read until the 500? Damn I'm just wasting my time, in my opinion you've spoiled the story since Chapter 30, for a ****** reason. Women trying to change the cool way of the protagonist.

This was not to my liking, you instead improve the MC, spoiled it completely, until it seems the story of 'Heir to the world' the only difference is that it does not have NTR.

I just wanted to give my opinion, nothing against you, author plus your story totally discouraged me, even left me with depression, I had never seen an MC that started legal, more fic ...

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
3 months ago

DarthVetar: At first I was good for the fights!
Character development: Ok

The reason for giving 2 star: Harém, are too many members in the harem!

Ok Vahn, it's a white paper! Even so, at every meeting with the girls, at least some of them were already members of the harem! It is all good to have presented visions of each one of them. But I do not think this justifies this harem!

System: I did not like it! It gives you the feeling that you're restricting MC! Well, not that he is, for he is not! That's all I feel!

Action and adventure: At first I was enjoying this, I know the purpose of this is the battle of Vahn's social life! But even so, if you can incorporate more of Action and Adventure into the future, it would be great!

Romance: None! At first, it is by the harem that it exists!

I wonder ... if it merged [Enkidu], the Emperor's Domain, and Vahn's blood, would it extinguish the Divinity of a God permanently?

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
3 months ago
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Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
3 months ago
Sorry but chapter was quite pale and we didn't get to know why he was profound sec anyway which was sad! View More
Dual Cultivation · C135
3 months ago
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The Sinners' Queen · C97
3 months ago
Sorry but gio and sofony love story really not working, when ever they did something romantic it felt like ither stupid or out of place. Because to me there relationship is something friends with benefit.

Still waiting for sofony doing it one night stand threesome and Chris becoming official host View More
The Sinners' Queen · C93
3 months ago
I don't think gio should be an MC this story because this is a story about immoral system and their host so not being a host gio shouldn't be a MC

I really wanted to see how sofony going to do her one night stand and also I am still surprised that sofony didn't do it with any girl, also I wanted to sofony threesome and Chris becoming host with help from sofony

Lastly I am little disappointed with today's chapter for technically first paid chapter because it was kinda little bit older side nothing happened only bunch of info dump.. View More
The Sinners' Queen · C91
3 months ago
I think this story should have not one but MC one sofony and other Chris, that way it would open lot of things like more story always have something to write, second than we would have two version of immoral host one male another female. What this would give us same mission two different perspective like have one night stand this two opposite gender in case of female it's very difficult task no matter how good looking the other party may be but in case of male it's god gifted mission to some.

So that why I want to see two MC View More
The Sinners' Queen · C90
3 months ago
Thanx for the 2 chapter because I really wanted to know what happened to Chris after. You it would be crazy and be funny if Wendy tells sofony that she likes Chris and wanted her help because what ever she tried she only angers him. With sofony's immoral system help she would get Chris like sofony hypnotise him to get closer to Wendy and system didn't help because Chris can officially be immoral host

I have a question did felicity ever loved him because if she really loved him that much than why steffy doesn't have any attractions towards chris....

Though I don't mind Chris and Wendy even I think it's interesting but it would more appropriate if Chris and steffy and also sofony tells him steffy is felicity... View More
The Sinners' Queen · C90
3 months ago

Ovizit: I wanted more chris story and I want to see sofony doing something immoral not with gio. I really wanted chapter where wendy and steffy about to assulted but sofony took their place to save them that's they thought and also they thought those men took her first time..

The Sinners' Queen · C88
3 months ago
I don't get how sofony know this miler dude is related to Lara when system on inform her she was suitable person to complete the quest, system didn't say who he married to and how sofony knows that that guys wife is not cheating on him because she won't cheat that doesn't mean everyone is the same...

I am not saying sofony should enjoy and actively cheat on gio all I want to see is if system giving her mission like one night stand, threesome(2 men), with other girl, threesome (2 girl) than she would dislike it even try to avoid it but at the end she would do it.
But if sofony don't do this than sofony should be removed as a main character and I want see more Chris what happened did he became one or not. Personally I would like to see Chris to be one that way we could see a dude version of immoral View More
The Sinners' Queen · C87
3 months ago
There are tons of way indirectly control people and a item coasting 20k-30k access by level 4-5 host could easily beat sofony little anti mind control ring View More

yanagi08: I think it was stated in a previous chapter. She can reveal details bout the system like its abilities but never say it's a system for immorality.

The Sinners' Queen · C86
3 months ago
You said that Fenrir wanted punish evil person by killing and creepling them and bring order by putting fear among people and those things just makes a person a tyrant. Only thing I meant to said if Fenrir did this she would become tyrant who have lone with few none companion that she could trust but she became ignorant about that world than she still be alone but not tyrant. View More

Einlion: No, this is entirely random when you consider the context of the story. If it isn't related to the context, it is random by default.

Fenrir's Journey : I Shall Devour The Heavens! · C60
3 months ago
I am not saying random things what I said she would become a tyrant who everyone will fear they will co-operate with her because they fear her most and respect her little and if she somehow became a weak than she won't have many person to realy upon and that's loneliness. View More

Einlion: Fenrir was alone the moment she entered this world so, once again, you're saying random **** xD

Fenrir's Journey : I Shall Devour The Heavens! · C60
3 months ago
I know I read it I said I didn't like sofony revealing too much info about her capabilities about system because the story was going sofony won't cheat and unless she started killing and torture other than sofony would be stuck in level 3-4 and there are thousands of hosts and most of them would be stronger so they could easily brain wash gio to turn against her. So than she would be in a big disadvantage. View More

yanagi08: I think it was stated in a previous chapter. She can reveal details bout the system like its abilities but never say it's a system for immorality.

The Sinners' Queen · C86
3 months ago
If Fenrir uses cruel methods like killing and bringing fear to others after few years Fenrir would found herself at same place as vhan was in divinision alone. View More
Fenrir's Journey : I Shall Devour The Heavens! · C60
3 months ago
I have a question few chapters back when a reader said it would be nice if vhan could get ghost rider eyes ability to punish sinner but than writer said he can't buy abilities now this chapter vhan can find mystery ability in item shop that can be brought..so I am confused!😥😥 View More
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C804
3 months ago
I have a question if system gave sofony a mission like do it with 2 random man. Is she gonna ask him for permission than I think if writer gonna go that path than I think sofony should remove as main character as using gio help completing this mission is to easy and also wierd him saying ok sofony doing other man. One last thing I think sofony revealing too much about the system... View More
The Sinners' Queen · C86
3 months ago
Looks like it... View More

LucioOrdo: Does she have... a brother complex? 0_o

Dual Cultivation · C127
3 months ago
I really felt bad that some of manor girls unique ability was not properly used like Lili transformation ability only use end up being satisfying vhan lust, mikito gravity magic wasn't property utilize ( you have remember in anima mikito almost one shot a level 5 boss). Mikito gravity magic would be great help when fighting a bulky enemy if she could master it using Eva magic system.. View More
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C802
4 months ago
Harmes made a fool out of vhan with out him being notice View More
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C798
4 months ago
My question is how did crish forgot everything even he forgot everything his system AI can't be hipnotise.

I was wondering when we will see sofony doing threesome.
I like to crish getting both Wendy and steffy. View More
The Sinners' Queen · C84
4 months ago
I feel like there is more to su yin and su yang relationship than simple brother and sister... View More
Dual Cultivation · C126
4 months ago
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