I think him biting his arm is a nice bit of characterization.
As soon as he chose these three things, his entire body began to burn from the inside, a pain intense enough to make him fall to the ground. Instead of screaming, he bit his arm.
Anime & Comics · lord_aurelian
Thank you for the chapter.
ch 15 Kushira Is Pregnant
Anime & Comics · lord_aurelian
Exactly, I get it the last ditch effort but he’s gonna get it anyways. You might as well just blow yourself up or something.
But Majin's expression remained unchanged. 'You dare try to give me something that is already mine?' he scoffed, his voice dripping with disdain.
Anime & Comics · lord_aurelian
Without warning, he grabbed her by the neck and pulled her in for a passionate kiss.
Anime & Comics · lord_aurelian
This is one of those things that either severely demoralizes the civilian population or gives them a morale boost. Although I guess it depends on which side is more popular. It is still a nice detail.
''You! Go and hang the empress in the centre of the city'' Majin ordered the shinobi who was still kneeling.
Anime & Comics · lord_aurelian
Thanks for the chapter.
I agree for the most part, but I think it depends on what kind of story you’re trying to tell. If you are writing a wish fulfillment story, I believe most of those things are okay. I agree that systems talking and interacting with the host is a bad thing for the most part unless they have a good explanation for it. Sadly, most of the time they do not. As for quests, most of the time quests seemed to line up with what the MC was going to do anyways. But it’s probably better to have them reject some to show that it’s not controlling. Quests end up being a way for the author to write things in a direction they want things to happen. All in all, I think systems are a fun genre that can help streamline power systems, although they also have the potential to become something the author overly relies on. Plus, I like seeing numbers go up.
Hikari was relieved he didn't end up with such a 'system.' Instead, he preferred the natural abilities and knowledge he had, seeing them as far more valuable, freeing, and overall safer.
Anime & Comics · Hanma_Jack
Thanks for the chapter.
ch 0 8 The decade old plan
Anime & Comics · lord_aurelian
All he has to do is raze the empire and build a new one then he won’t be breaking his promise.
Before the Third Prince could respond, Majin added, "I swear on my chakra vines that I will never even dare to have thoughts about the imperial throne."
Anime & Comics · lord_aurelian
Thank you for the chapter.
"I am from His Highness' Navy, Colonel T Bone, ordered to take over Icewood City."
Anime & Comics · MrTranslator
Grand Turk seems to be ten kilometers long.
[Ding! Triggered side quest: Find an island with a diameter of no less than ten kilometers as the Naval base. Reward: one Naval Standard Base building, Naval Standard Light Military Regulations, and one Naval Standard Battle Unit!]
Anime & Comics · MrTranslator
It’s kind of made up. We don’t really know much about Devil Fruits’ reincarnation, other than Blackbeard seems to know a lot about it. The only time we’ve really seen it is on Punk Hazard when the big slimes axolotl Devil Fruit reincarnates into a nearby bag of apples. So the assumption is that Devil Fruits go to the nearest fruit, but again, we don’t really know.
Honestly, he only knew of one single devil fruit that reincarnated into a specific fruit from his memories. The Axolotl zoan devil fruit reincarnated into apples.
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
That should be 1,333,333 cabbages.
The problem being, getting his hands on one. If he wanted to buy one, they were ludicrously pricey. Even the weakest or ones with unknown effects, went for at least two hundred million beri.
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
Thanks for the chapter. I hope you feel better.
ch 0 6 Imperial Court Will Be Stained With Blood
Anime & Comics · lord_aurelian
This is all I can think of whenever a line like this happens.
"I know," Majin replied calmly, not showing any surprise at her announcement.
With My Impregnation System In The World Of Naruto
Anime & Comics · lord_aurelian