What more can I say... As a poison tester this novel is like an oasis in the middle of a desert . Easily one of the best novel I've ever read. . Come fellow daoist .. the Dao is strong in this one.
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okay... the plot sypnosis is just superb.. so imma check it out' ......... ....... ....... ....... ......... ......... ....... ....... ....... .......... ......... ....... .......
this author... this author... hahaha havent had a fun read like this in a while since reverend insanity with a different taste... last lines always got me...LOL
now 2 appeared again 😅😂
All Hail The Potato.. * cough * Your superb introductory got me hooked up..
All Hail The Potato.. * cough * Your superb introductory got me hooked up..
First thing first.. Give you a 5* rating cos I really enjoy this novel.. Pros : Story is Good.. Has lot of potential. Mc cheat and path to power seems interesting and it got me hooked right from the beginning.. Good job author. Pros : * sigh * Even though I got so hooked up n immersed in the story I can't help but feel irritated by the simple mistakes?? Of the translator or the Author. For f sake.. Please.. Even if ur not that good in grammar at least write the spellings right.. Too many wrong spellings n misplaced words.. To point out a few.. Every time we saw Mc status update we see "Mentle" power that should be "Mental" power * Hmmm * Pls at least fix this.. The spellings n grammar mistakes are an eyesore for this unpolished Novel that has a lot of potential to rise up.. Pls fix.. Asap. ** : M rooting for you Author to make this story better than it already is..'
So no-one notice the 'shorn' in the pill name.. As in Yukeli shorn.. Noone seems to find it strange just like the Mc.. *sigh* mortals
ty Author Sama .. that's all I can say. Gracias ..
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