is Gavin gay? He gives different vibes at times
ch 35 Chapter thirty-five: Gavin's secret
Urban · JaycelleRodriguez
this is perfection on a whole new level. good work
ch 12 The Bloody Hand
Fantasy · LadyTrex
he is so shameless toward a clueless girl
I believe its alright to have mysteries to keep readers on the edge. but if u make it more like a puzzle it becomes interesting, esp knowing that with more chapters each puzzle is unearthed. if there are too many mounting mysteries without just one recovery then it becomes more like a dessert. however thank you.
ch 16 Mad man
Fantasy · winterdaisy55
this story has so many ommissions and mystries that it gets too boring to read. the content itself is great buh the FL is too much of a coward who is depicted to be strong it makes one really loose interest. I think those little things need attention and your book will soar
ch 16 Mad man
Fantasy · winterdaisy55
I believe u need a lil work on this paragraph,esp the use of past and present tense.
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Fantasy · winterdaisy55
🤣🤣🤣🤣 I'm hooked, I must say
Thane slightly pauses before silently shaking his head and saying "No, you can go. I'll go after you." I nod my head and pull out clean clothes. I can't wait to get out of these things! My poor boobs need to breathe...
Fantasy · Blissfullrage
Still waiting for "pregnant wife runs away"... The pain she is enduring and bearing...enough is enough. Let her disappear
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So u freed her to let her fall into an abuyss?
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So the Li Shen guy took the two (Xinxin and Dr Gu) to a hotel or what?
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After how many chapters will she be able to escape? I'm tired of having to feel sorry for her
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What angers me the most is a powerless woman. Why do authors like to write about women who have no other options but to let men step all over them?
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I have a feeling that Tang Xin is actually the woman he has been looking for. I stand to be corrected. Fact that this Xixin lost memories before 8 is some how questionable. What if the Tang family exchanged them?
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so she just got cheated on n she is now happy? twisted
ch 31 Becoming The Alpha
Fighting Mate
Fantasy · Monachre