Badges 8
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+1 quality is good for the amount of chapters that you put out
Keep it the same
Halo: Be Human
Video Games · MEMES_R_gud
Is baskerville a good sugestion?
10.) Any other suggestions?
Halo: Be Human
Video Games · MEMES_R_gud
i can read this parragraph. it is mostly jumbled up to the point that most of it is giberish. there are paragraphs like this in most of the chapters, why
"Let's get this over with, and then we can make preparations to get this circus on the move. I swear the Alliance goes as overboard with political observers as the Humans do with military force." The Dryad added.
Humanity's Greatest Mecha Warrior System
Sci-fi · Aoki_Aku
a way to make it so that it doesn't affect the story much is that he can only increase the stats artifically by decimal points like by 0.1 per point and that he can't put say put 10 points in a stat at once. you can also make it so that the larger the stat the more points needed to make that stat higher. one thing that you can do that would probaly help is to make skills that he can learn, such as shooting(Rifles) or CQC(UNSC). the words in the parentheses being the specifics that the skill would work on and that he has to continually use and practice to raise the skill level. this should help you
ch 0 -3 Information about the System
Halo: Be Human
Video Games · MEMES_R_gud
option 1 or 3.
(A/N: You'll be voting for this since I'm going to take a break in writing for a week or more - can't believe I've been writing this for almost 3 months. The 3 options are summarised like this, the faster the progression of Hanns, the harsher the challenges.)
Multiverse: War Thunder System
Video Games · Jake_Hansel
this is what I thought would happen when you showed the lightning body spell. It mutated or modified his destruction to have elements of lightning to it. I am happy to see that my prediction at that time was correct. Now then, GO AND GET SCATHACH!!
ch 148 Chapter 141
A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne
CLARKSON!!!!
Great, I do not know Italian so I don't understand anything. Ugh at least I know it's Italian so the likeliness of being in Italy is very high... I know, sometimes my genius is almost frightening.
Fate as an Alchemist
Anime & Comics · Vitamin_F
keep going as is
3. Keep going as I am.
High School DXD Mars
Anime & Comics · kazenoou02
lord have mercy
(AN: You can comment here Yua's child and teenager appearance)
Born with an Innate Technique in Jujutsu Kaisen
Anime & Comics · BloodStone
the answer to that question is........RUN AWAY!!!!
(AN: In Bleach, Rukia learn Shikai from Kaien about 3 or 5 years after she graduated. Since that happened Fifty years before she met Ichigo, it means she had Shikai for 50 years. What's more, she is an expert in Kido. Despite this, she nearly died because of some weak ass hollow in Ep/Ch 1. There are many possible reasons. One, she jumped in to save Ichigo who was stupid and rushed toward an enemy he can't beat. Two. She was traumatized because of the event that would happen soon in Canon and didn't train for 5O years. Three and honestly the most likely. Kubo didn't really create the concept of Shikai in CH 1. The first Shikai was introduced in CH 54 with Renji. That basically one year and two weeks since the first CH of Bleach. Also did you know that initially Rukia was supposed to be the main character of Bleach?)
GOJO: A Sorcerer in the Soul Society
Anime & Comics · HIKARU_GENJI
WHY!?!?!?!? JUST WHY!?!?!?!?!?
After shaking the blood of his gloved hand with a look of disgust on his face under his mask, Wraith stood there for a while, chuckling darkly to himself. Admiring his work till deciding he had had enough fun, and he left. Still chuckling to himself like he had just told the funniest joke ever.
Slayer Chronicles: Book 1: RWBY
Anime & Comics · TJ_Watkins
oh no
"Now... how to punish the man in the most humiliating way that would make Rei praise me." Pakura's eyes darkened and glinted in a peculiar way that made Kaya take a step back when Pakura turned towards her with a mischievous smile, "Hey Kaya... You said the brother of the Earth Daimyo, one of the five grand nobles of the Land of Earth is currently visiting the village, right?" Pakura's eyes started to hover over Jiraiya's unconscious form, narrowed in a catlike way with a bit of glee in them. "I wonder..."
In Naruto: Reborn with Talent
Anime & Comics · KasiCair
i picture a chibi logan siting on top of a large grimm corpse with the sidewinder next to him
Ozpin: "Logan?" Ozpin said in a very quiet voice. "I doubt anything could survive that."
RWBY: Fireborn (Complete)
Anime & Comics · Hawkin
lord have mercy on their souls.
Gods were among them.
Fate/Remnant
Anime & Comics · CultivatorDragon
the malachite sisters or glynda
ch 51 Ch 50: Memories: Wraith Raising
Slayer Chronicles: Book 1: RWBY
Anime & Comics · TJ_Watkins
where are the images from?!?!?
( i m a g e )
Danmachi: Reborn with EMIYA's Powers
Anime & Comics · Feniurme