Coolpants

Coolpants

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Just a random person on the internet who likes to argue with other random people on the internet about stuff despite not knowing much about the lore :) League ruined me.....

2019-01-26 Joined Global
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Coolpants
Coolpants
1 years ago
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1 years ago
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It's a pretty good fic all things considered. The quality is superb and progression is good. There a few elements which make it jarring to read but you can just chalk it up to "Yeah he was a Monster Hunter, fair enough". One of the better fics I have read in a while. Keep up the work Author. PS: Also if you do not mind Author, will do a shameless pitch of my own work here.

Coolpants
Coolpants
1 years ago
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Customary first review by the Shameless author. This is my first attempt at writing a story, so please be gentle. I will try to be as faithful to the original characters as possible, but please show some leniency to me. Also some questions about the story: 1. Will there be romance? I dunno, I would try to add it and make it as natural as possible but with my experience of nil, it will be a bit difficult. 2. Harem? No. Nothing against them, but I feel it is very difficult to write one and not seem like a Xianxia. 3. OP Protagonist? I mean he will eventually, but not right now. Have you seen how useless D&D characters are up until level 5 or 6? He will struggle with doors. 4. Will the D&D magic and HP magic be the same? Oh you will get to know. But both will stay distinct and separate. 5. Since D&D has levels, will this be a game fic? Unfortunately no. There will be no system. But this is indeed a Progression Fantasy.

Coolpants
Coolpants
1 years ago
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Muramasa better be careful. As soon as Naruto realises that Muramasa is able to separate out spirits, the sooner he will be captured and given to Mayuri for testing. separate out Kurama and have him absorb all the Biju to become the Juubi.

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Coolpants
Coolpants
1 years ago
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GLORIOUS EVOLUTION

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1 years ago
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he is called mitsuki.

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1 years ago
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Boruto. I think the first person to ever canonically master Snake Sage Mode on the show(who we witnessed).

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1 years ago
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1 years ago
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Huh?

Clearing her throat, she turned to the right, just now processing she was walking side by side, with her father.

Reborn As Papa Silva

Reborn As Papa Silva

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Coolpants
Coolpants
2 years ago
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What in the Naruto!?! Killed him, forgot him, grew apart and all he needed to forgive her was to know she is spidergirl. I mean understanding that they are different people and they grew apart is fine. But how tf can you forgive your killer tf in like 5-6 chapters. This is some next level Naruto bs.

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    Harry Potter and The Wizard in his Head

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    When Voldemort's spell hit Lily magic. The magic that she called was not one of Protection, but a call for a Protector. What answered the call was a Wizard, grander than this world has seen. What happens when one in charge of protecting the Scales of Balance between the Planes of Oerth, is now in charge of protecting an infant. "Since I have nothing better to do, as gratefulness to break me out of the Madness of Barovia, I shall train you to be the greatest Wizard this world has seen...." *Cute Baby giggles* "Oh Vecna take me now"

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