Tajarin

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2019-01-30 Joined Global
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Tajarin
Tajarin
15 days ago
Posted

Nice premise and beginning, but immediately after the start there's no progress or goal anywhere to find. It's utterly boring. Which is probably just like any other cultivation novel, but here the Minecraft - mechanics should have more influence and yet nothing happens. The MC is - like so often - written as especially dense, which is played for laughs, but it's only annoying.

Tajarin
Tajarin
2 months ago
Commented

Another nerf mechanic. Yay. As if this fic needed that...

Tajarin
Tajarin
2 months ago
Commented

Did the system just silently die in a ditch somewhere? I'm pretty sure he still has a point left to invest at least. And with what all he did, he definitely should've earned some more.

Tajarin
Tajarin
2 months ago
Posted

Well, it's definitely a very good translation. The story itself is a bit one-toned, as the MC pretty much gets everything handed to him. If you have lots of time to waste, it's definitely worth it though.

Tajarin
Tajarin
2 months ago
Posted

It's definitely AI Slop, as there's many times when character names completely change from chapter to chapter and the whole diction of the story is very "AI-y" It's not as bad as others of its like though, so some stars are appropriate

Tajarin
Tajarin
3 months ago
Posted

It's inconsistent AI Slop. No big surprises here. Details constantly change from chapter to chapter and decisions of characters have no grounds in common sense.

Tajarin
Tajarin
3 months ago
Commented

So far so bad. 70 gp left suddenly turns into 91. Saving points for something LUCK BASED until "you know your situation better" is counter intuitive. Stacking your deck makes more sense.

Tajarin
Tajarin
4 months ago
Posted

It's really not a good story. Especially for a system story. Very inconsistent. Stats go missing, level ups are forgotten about. The whole sequence of how he came to be a gamer makes no sense whatsoever. The author has written stuff that's ok. This ain't it.

Tajarin
Tajarin
4 months ago
Replied to Zeno

It being from his curse class is utterly ridiculous. He could've taken a class not related to curses.

Tajarin
Tajarin
4 months ago
Commented

That makes two forgotten about bronze tickets now