Gostei do início ainda mais por ser no meu idioma nativo já que é difícil achar fanfics boas em português, porém, essa estrutura de diálogo perde um pouco da imersão. Consegue alterar? Ao invés de: - Diálogo aqui - Substituir por: "Diálogo aqui" E pensamentos: 'Dialogo aqui ' Dessa forma fica mais fácil a leitura já que é um padrão bem mais comum.
ch 0 2 Infância heróica.
Anime & Comics · StKetchup
Yes, even more so when the character is a child. I'll try to read another two chapters but I'm unlikely to continue.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - A second chance
Anime & Comics · Michaellll
What exactly gave you the courage to threaten someone who was once strong enough to fight Garp? And why didn't Don Chinjao kill him? He can barely defeat a 14 million pirate.
ch 0 5 I Will Kill You and Your Bloodline Chinjao!
Anime & Comics · IWriteFanfic
Obrigado pelo capítulo, One Piece é uma ótima escolha de mundo para descontrair um pouco.
ch 63 World Of Pirates: Part 01
Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
Hulk at DC? Sounds interesting, thanks for the chapter.
ch 75 Lanius
Anime & Comics · EgyptianDio
There's no point in deleting it, you're stealing content and trying to profit from it, in that last chapter you simply copied ALL of Wonder Woman's interaction from the Young Titan fanfic, ask me if anything in that fanfic is really original and not stolen from someone else.
ch 30 Chapter - 28
Anime & Comics · Demon_King22
Now I read up to chapter 8 and I must say that the story is very good, I ended up creating high expectations about the MC as he survived a surprise attack from an S Rank Shinobi even during an emotional outburst that not even his father survived and that's why this I had very high expectations anyway I won't read on but I wish you good luck.
ch 0 5 Moving forward
Anime & Comics · xine_reader
So it's that kind of story huh... An absurdly talented random "OC" that manages to go toe-to-toe with the MC who was able to survive Obito even without Hashirama's cells, too bad because I was really enjoying this story but that kind of forced development is hard to swallow.
ch 0 5 Moving forward
Anime & Comics · xine_reader
Worse, he's right hahaha
ch 41 Kintama-4
Anime & Comics · EgyptianDio
Wow, is he weaker than the original Spider-Man after all? Spider-sense would have alerted him even though he was "distracted" with Rino, it's always annoying when the convenient author forgets what his own MC can do just to better fit the plot.
ch 17 Arc One. Chapter Seventeen. Midtown Mayhem
Movies · Mallison
Congratulations on the translation, is there a schedule for you to post new chapters? I'm very curious about what will happen
ch 0 7 Chapter-7 Gasping bat (Rewritten)
Anime & Comics · Rex_Zatch
This chapter reminds me why villainous MCs are so popular on this site.
ch 0 6 Now That's Orange (6)
Anime & Comics · FanHarem
I liked you author, you know how to receive criticism and respond calmly, normally on this site the first moment someone says something that the author doesn't agree with he simply responds with "You don't like it, don't read it" Or something along those lines. Now, what's important... Can we expect our dear MC to meet some quality MILFs? As someone reincarnated with a mentality above their real age and in a non-modern world, I believe it is a perfectly valid question.
The Enlightened One (Senju!SI)
Anime & Comics · Kakukami