Webnovel Author: godofsystems - Fanfic Collection

I love this story. Honestly one of the best marvel stories on this site, and probably all of marvel fanfics. It's even got me rethinking how I should plan and write my own stories. Anyways, lets get into it: Writing Quality: 3/5 -It's understandable, but not correct. quite a few times while reading it would switch for example he/she and himself/herself with the wrong person, combine words or simply typos. You can still read it and correct the grammar like a filter in your head, but that might simply be me. Stability of Updates: 3/5 -the author doesn't post as often as someone would like. you can check Table of contents to see yourself. In 62 chapters, its been an entire year and likely some months. However, while it is only 62 chapters the amount of words per chapter simply is crazy. Each chapter I believe self nearly maximizes the word count. EACH CHAPTER. so it is still a long story. And besides, this is a fanfic. One can update whenever they like to. Story Development: 5/5 -The story flows in my biased eyes, but also objectively, extremely good. Like, smooth butter good. It is of course goes linear, however the author is willingly and has skipped certain chunks of things, with no problems. How the MC power and influence develops and all the reaction's is worth it. And one thing this author can really do? Payoff. No spoilers or anything, but one of the things that since the start of the story was only now solved. No, it wasn't delayed or denied for stupid reasons, It was in the background, happening and moving but not the main focus. By chapter 62, it has ended, and what a payoff in the story. Btw, there is no nerfs or illogical things that really happen in the story. Everything has a sound, thoughtful thinking and action within it. Also, Author never nerfed and likely will never nerf the MC, as well as great power progression. Character Design: 5/5 -Every, single character feels fleshed out. They are not one dimensional at all. Even Bad guys, or minor side characters. The author does this by not only letting us observe through the MC, their actions and how they aren't retarded at all. Also, the use of different POV's is a stable in this. By switching it we see different perspectives, and none to me, especially the main cast so to say, are one dimenstional. Hell, the relationships feel genuine too. In a fanfic, on webnovel, the relationships feel Human. it's crazy. Word Background: 5/5 -Obviously, fanfics have a huge headstart with an already established Background, but as the author here does, he adds his own twists into it. the background here is a mix between comics and MCU. And that is so simply yet so ingenious. The MCU plotline for the major events, but with comics mix between, so for example: The alien invasion on new york not only happens earlier but with more heroes [not including the mc] and villains. [And here again there was a setup and payoff of the invasion.] In short, I would recommend to anyone to read this fanfics, so long as grammar and spelling isn't a big deal and you can get through it, you should read this. Although let me say this: -If you come to read pure wish fulfillment this one is not it - come here purely for that harem and smut, nah bro, this is not the one for you. -if you can't accept if the MC[Author] does something that really makes common sense to do in that scenario and that the MC is mature and isn't like a Cultivation MC who slaps all who insult him, not for you. Other than that, Enjoy this one!

This just reminded me of old me when I used to watch this. Stopped midway in the series and have no idea how it ended, but just cause you are writing this, imma give you 5 stars.

oh boy this is a great read. instead of opinion let me give you facts. facts of this story and compare it to you're average fanfic: average fanfic -readable grammar -fast paced -one dimensional characters are common - nothing intresting happens - wish fullfilment jerk off - Annoying mc - plot holes. List could go on. Now this fanfic? Marvel:Re-Do - Great grammar. Very little to what I noticed - Good paced story with time skips to make things feel like its moving faster than what it is. You will see after like the first 10 chapters. - Characters here feel real. Some crazy but that's on purpose. Character interaction feels legit and like you're reading someone actually talk to a person. Not perfect but great. -Interesting shit happens, and it happens quick. -in relation to previous one, Interesting things happen that may or may no go our mc's way. -Mc doesn't feel annoying, and has good character development. -none that I remember or noticed really - Power progression is good because of the mc's power is perfect for it but it isn't fast nor to slow really. Perfect abiliy really. ( if you want to know what it is and some early things that happen that kicks off the story scroll down bro has adaptability and is a mutant. Get's captured by hydra so they can make super serum and soldiers out of it and also train him to become one as well. The process wasn't easy because his blood can adapt and shit.

The story is good. I personally like it and while some of the jokes aren't the best it does make me chuckle or smile. Writing quality is good. Some might say it isn't but this is a fanfic, plus not everyone first taal is engels. anyways, the story is good and it's solid pasing THERE is one problem though. While on could say because the title on what the story is, the writer does "bug fix" with the system and power system in the story. Doesn't seem like a big deal. Till the story goes from Spiderman having what looks and probably feels like wolverine regen(20% per minute thing) to a rather minor regen. Then later he brings it back up again. It's annoying to be honest. The constant nerfing then buffing then nerfing is annoying and while it is what the incomplete system means godamm man, it's annoying. Also in general characters aren't really interesting, but ok But overall it is a good fanfic to enjoy reading. You read for good time passing and to enjoy and it's for you. Author, keep up the good work bro. PS: hopefully don't take to much offense to it. Have a good day.