Webnovel Author: Chidleba - Novel Collection

I'm enjoying the story and thanks author but..... you seem to be going after a lot of praising the MC in your style of writing. you are slowly leaning to the way other trashy novels keep dragging the story. The story is flowing with a slow pace and dragging so please don't add more and make it unbearable to wait.

finally the chapter that reveals the truth

the author said he was 27 years old before he died and reincarnated....the thing that annoyed me was him bothering about having no toddler friends....MC...at your age...not possible

The part of seeing many world's that others haven't seen can be a great set up for the MCs character and wisdom later on...

Author....it was going well until this chapter. Why would you give him all the abilities and still talk about how other MCs get more powerful abilities. The three divine abilities were already enough but since you wanted a foolproof MC that acts like an MC of any story with strong instincts and powerful weapon mastery etc.....why did you say the MC is different. The MC now will all those abilities that you didn't want to explain how he got them, you decided to gift him in the beginning. Anyone can survive with all those abilities.

can you read my new webnovel called The Homeless Mage and give me your honest review.

masterful storytelling

you outdone your self again author....well done

subarashi

magnificent

I love you author👌👌👌

exactly my point...sigh too simplified

stop there author..... don't make everything about a girl falling for a handsome boy. Just give us a proper MC with a proper conviction

let me tell you my thoughts author. Mixing milk and meat is bad because the calcium makes it hard for the body to absorb the iron.

Thanks for your opinion. The reason I did that is because I wanted to build the character of the MC for the following chapters

Hahahaah the author took it too far.

sweet jesus