I can recommend Marvel: Re-Do, it is about a Mc who awakens the Lutent ability to adapt and evolve, see if you can maybe find inspiration in it or for the readers, I can recommend it 👍
And while we're thinking of questions, I got one for you guys. See all fanfictions have some bad ass character with op abilities, like lightning manipulation, fire, darkness, light. But I've never seen anyone do something as simple as Physical adaptation, The ability to grow stronger and evolve past your current strengths. Kind of like Darwin's abilities from the X-men. But instead of gaining new powers, your body just grows. From being a baseline human, to peak, to beyond. It's a simple ability, like say you get shot and when you heal, your skin is denser and can withstand multiple bullets before it begins to do real damage. Or say when you punch something, and it breaks your hand. When your hand heals it can withstand the previous force that broke it.
Anime & Comics · TrapcardD
I could imagine that
1. A pair of short axes
Anime & Comics · komega
I think the goal and journey are missing, you either concentrate on the goal or the journey and character development. On the other hand As your story is now I don’ t see much difficulties that are long term, only some short term like the attack of his teammates but no complications. You have the perfect villain in Danzo or a hidden orgamization of mercenaries or something like that. But as of now your character is just simply existing and not creating in an already existing story. My Tip: Be bold, change what you want to change and let him live a life of difficulties Fun and Creative writing ✍️
ch 48 Not a Chapter
Anime & Comics · komega
I like your passion of youth😂
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Anime & Comics · Navy_King
How about „I am Krillin“, I think it was quite good. Nice chapter👍
ch 13 A mission with Nick fucking Fury
Movies · arekuruutento
My disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined
Sigh... The anger and disappointment in me is immense... And the worst thing is that the fanfic didn't have any revisions warning the readers... Urg!
Book&Literature · Se7en
For my taste, his reactions are a bit artificial and the dialoge is missing completely. You just advance the plot, but dont care about writing his character and enhancing the story. The story in its enterity feels a bit soulles, good idea but to focused ob the plot. But the idea is worthy to put in a fanfic
ch 0 1 Rebirth and Quirk Awakening
Anime & Comics · Omega200
For my taste, his reactions are a bit artificial and the dialoge is missing completely. You just advance the plot, but dont care about writing his character and enhancing the story. The story in its enterity feels a bit soulles, good idea but to focused ob the plot. But the idea is worthy to put in a fanfic
ch 0 1 Rebirth and Quirk Awakening
Anime & Comics · Omega200
+1
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Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
Ill tell you something. Little movements like shaking your legs etc are goong a long way in maintaining a coloric defecit. Just try to move as much as possible even while sitting and you are feeling much more motivated to do the big things
Hopefully, I'll lose the weight within 3 months and start building muscle.
Anime & Comics · TheTwoTwo
These arent gravity szones, just planets with higher mass and thus greater gravity
Kayn smiled in satisfaction and looked at the interface of his space pod. The displayed show the planet's Gravity Zones, Hard to Breathe Zones, and the Polluted Zone! This place had been scouted before, so they had some information on the planet.
Anime & Comics · Monster_Paradise
I uave to say, Im really impressed. Your introduction was wonderfull. It introduced the theme the characters the future plot of a fanfic the changes the character. Ot is really enjoyable to see so much improvement. I hope to see much more of auch tought thrugh things. Tanks for the chapter and keep going👍
ch 74 Another Year, Another Train Journey
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
The layout when you read a novel on the website is quite unsatisfactory. I prefer it, if there is no limitation to the text left and right, because you don’t have to fo to the next line quite as often. But I am quite happy that the fanfiction novel site allows the writer to write about what they want and don’t zensor them 👍
ch 66 HPMRS CH 66: Feirce Fight!
Movies · tempestpanda
Thanks for the book and great ending. Definitely a book to recommend
ch 751 King of the World (Grand Finale)
Anime & Comics · Franxiscus_Siregar
Pls just switch the picture back … it looks like every throwaway harem novel 🤦♂️🥴😂
ch 58 Chunin Exam Part 8
The Best Shinobi
Anime & Comics · Evil_Paragon