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It has the ability to be a great novel, however you skip out on too much information that is the stuff that makes a novel captivating and enjoyable. For example between chapters 110 and 111, the entire event is skipped out and the whole infiltration and fight scene is brushed over. You can't expect the readers to believe that during the time he infiltrated the hideout, the other group managed to get all their members assembled, locate the hideout and kill all the remaining NPC's so that the MC can just stay hidden and follow on. Too many missing details, plot points and just inconsistencies in the story that's butchered a potential great novel. It's understandable that filler chapter's and info can get generic and occasionally boring but to skip out on everything..... it feels too rushed. Not going to bother talking about the grammar because at this point after reading enough novels on this site I've come to expect that it's not a strong suit of many writers, along with their proof reading.
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It has the ability to be a great novel, however you skip out on too much information that is the stuff that makes a novel captivating and enjoyable. For example between chapters 110 and 111, the entire event is skipped out and the whole infiltration and fight scene is brushed over. You can't expect the readers to believe that during the time he infiltrated the hideout, the other group managed to get all their members assembled, locate the hideout and kill all the remaining NPC's so that the MC can just stay hidden and follow on. Too many missing details, plot points and just inconsistencies in the story that's butchered a potential great novel. It's understandable that filler chapter's and info can get generic and occasionally boring but to skip out on everything..... it feels too rushed. Not going to bother talking about the grammar because at this point after reading enough novels on this site I've come to expect that it's not a strong suit of many writers, along with their proof reading.
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