to get your jollies off by tormenting a little boy with hope and then cruelly snatching it away? all jokes aside tho it is good but man I hope you have a way of making Harry stronger for the fights against grindy and dumby cuz the way you have shown them, no one has been capable of restraining them except each other and if you don't make the payoff worth it, it might ruin the entire premise
AN: Don't worry. I'm sort of writing about the situation from the worst side. I'm sort of done kicking Neville while he's down. I won't say anything else to avoid spoilers but there's a reason why I handled Hermione the way I did.
Book&Literature · athass_prkr
congratulations man!!! am so happy for you!! wish you, your wife and your kid all the blessings and happiness in the world!!
And since I finally started sleeping properly in the past month, I got my Masters and worked as a screenwriter for a local entertainment show, and yeah… I AM A DAD!
Video Games · El_Don
amazing chapter ma man And I am getting somemanofsteel Kryptonian world engine vibes!!
ch 736 Hijacker of Oblivion
Video Games · El_Don
absolutely man take that hiatuswe will all be right here waitingand in the meanwhile if you want to share some of those sweet sweet other stories........... well you won't find us complaining!![img=recommend]
ch 76 Dawn Of Super Heroes
Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
thought is ok I am just confused cuz the way you described it felt like ketki did everything u described in a single day which just does not seem possibleand the way u have been writing the past few chapters feel very roboticsomething like this- " Robert woke up. Robert cooked food, Robert went to office his boss praised him for work well done, Robert came home played on his switch then he went out to eat food. he met his friend there.Robert- hello friend how are you Friend- i am ok Robert how are youRobert - i .friend i am going for dinner now bye friendFriend- yes of course Robert goodnight and bye then Robert went home and went to sleep"i am getting something like this vibes for past few chapterssorry if i am not able to articulate well but if u need to check check your begining chapters (20s and 30s) and read now ones I think you might understand my point
ch 96 Embracing the Kingdom - KETKI
History · maddymudda
why the heck do all the recent chapters read like a quest book ⁉️ like seriously doesn't it feel like literally everyone including side and main characters are not people but just npcs in a indie rpg game or something?or is it just me?
ch 96 Embracing the Kingdom - KETKI
History · maddymudda
so basically nothing happened in this chapter?and you need to work on your delivery style man half the time I was convinced ki the raids were happening in two different places or you were doing some before after scenes
ch 45 Blood drenched sands
Anime & Comics · DaoistyaSOLa
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ya gotta be there to see here
The fact that he didn't wear clothes to hide his upper body didn't help with the unintentional seduction either. He was wearing a pair of black jeans and a black, armless trenchcoat that even had a hoodie. He always liked trenchcoats. He had his slightly zipped up though, causing his bare and jacked chest to be revealed to the world. (Image:)
Anime & Comics · That_One_Alive_Ali
preach bro preachfelt very uncomfortable tried skipping to how it became like this but almost all was smit so just mostly skipped myself
ch 43 SS: An Alternate World: 1
Anime & Comics · SentToOblivion
my only recommendation is PLEASE end this arc alreadyi get it intelligence woo hoo *inappriopriate moaning* but please for the love of God end this already my guyit would look better if it FELT like a chase of one person countering other then the other countering the first in increasingly over the top displays like with light and lbut here most of the time it seems like riddle does something and then Harry is left picking up the piecesthis all would have been much more palatble if u had given ur guy a year or two more to u know get on a somewhat level playing fieldas is with so much against him all this really does is make the mc look extremely incompetent and that's not even the worst of itwith how u r portraying dairymort makes readers wonder if he is so f ing intelligent *inappropriate moaning again* why the heck didn't he already conquer the world using his witif he is so cautious shouldn't he have researched the pros and cons BEFORE making horcruxesand I know u might give excuse that it is CANONi don't care if u can change story to show riddle vastly more intelligent than portrayed in cannon u should be ready to tackle the issues that bringsin cannon diarymort was an emotional wreck who while cumning was also very emotional and arrogant which is the main reason why he underestimated Harry so much and this paid the price
ch 94 Chapter 94: Fire Storm
Book&Literature · athass_prkr
man I always love it when i see the blue dot next to your book always makes my day!!
ch 739 Failsafe
Dragonborn Saga
Video Games · El_Don