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An İnteresting read. I haven't read all of it though. Might update when I read all. [img=recommend][img=update][img=exp][img=update][img=exp]

Well, this will be my first time writing such a long review. When I first started reading it, I had 0 expectations and the first few chapters were kinda meh. But it pickes up rather quicky and a good read overall. Writing Quality: Great. There are few mistakes but they are mainly typo. Grammar is solid overall. Stability of Updates: Well, I binged it recently so, not sure. Story Development: Now... The story progress is good. But time is going slow in the story. 49 chapters in and only like 1 month passed. A lot of things happened in this 1 month and mc gets stronger at a fast rate since he trains and has a cheat. The timing is slow probably because there are a lot of characters to focus. Mc is also a character that doesn't care about canon and does whatever he wants so he is very interesting. Mc really deserves the title 'Chaotic Neutral'. He has no morals whatsoever yet he doesn't do anything evil for no reason(he does it sometimes tho, when benefical to him), he also doesn't seem to have bloodlust against civillians even though he lets them get killed in several occasions. Well... Idk how the author even came up with such a character. He really is very unique. As for side-characters there are a few interesting ones. Especially Bernard( my favorite). One annoying yet funny thing about mc is that he lies A LOOOT. Sometimes it is fun sometimes annoying. And he speaks so much nonsense too. He also talks trash to literally anyone, including his crew. One thing I want to see is his interractions with Sanji though! Mc just skipped over him lol. World Background: Well, it is one piece, so obviously great. Overall: A very interesting story with an unpredictable mc. I wonder how it will progress. [img=update][img=update]

Not bad. Could have been much better though. [img=exp][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins]